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Subject [GitHub] [pulsar] Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5052: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security-token-admin
Date Mon, 02 Sep 2019 02:49:46 GMT
Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5052: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security-token-admin
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5052#discussion_r319792582
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-token-admin.md
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 @@ -8,38 +8,37 @@ sidebar_label: Token authentication admin
 
 Pulsar supports authenticating clients using security tokens that are based on [JSON Web
Tokens](https://jwt.io/introduction/) ([RFC-7519](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519)).
 
-You can use tokens to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some "principal" (or "role")
that
-is permitted to do some actions (for example, publish to a topic or consume from a topic).
+You can use tokens to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some "principal" (or "role")
that is permitted to do some actions (for example, publish to a topic or consume from a topic).
 
-A user typically gets a user a token string from the administrator (or some automated service).
+A user typically gives a user a token string from the administrator (or some automated service).
 
 Review comment:
   A user typically gets a token string from the administrator (or some automated service).

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