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From Dave Fisher <dave2w...@comcast.net>
Subject Re: current OpenOffice Flyers
Date Thu, 11 Oct 2018 16:14:05 GMT
Also in the English version “WasWhat id Apache OpenOffice?” Should be “What is Apache
OpenOffice?”

Regards,
Dave

> On Oct 11, 2018, at 4:29 AM, Tal Daniel <tal.reads@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Looks good. Mind that you left in the English language version the slogan
> "die free ..." on the bottom.
> 
> Suggestion: Consider writing supported OS in 2 lines, rather than breaking
> the line after "For".
> 
> בתאריך יום ה׳, 11 באוק׳ 2018, 3:20, מאת Carl Marcum ‏<cmarcum@apache.org>:
> 
>> 
>> 
>> On 10/09/2018 05:41 AM, Peter Kovacs wrote:
>>> Hi all,
>>> 
>>> the german community has updated our flyers.
>>> 
>>> Current Version can be found at [1]
>>> 
>>> If you are french or english native speaker, please have a look.
>>> 
>>> And give some feedback, thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> All the best
>>> 
>>> Peter
>>> 
>>> [1]
>>> https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1kpVknzJfZwuV5TOFvezg1V_TZLoSgYaY
>>> 
>> 
>> Hi Peter,
>> 
>> I can help with the English version if I can get it in a format I can
>> cut/paste paragraphs out of without going across the tri-folds.
>> 
>> A few quick ones...
>> 
>> change:
>> WasWhat is Apache OpenOffice?
>> to:
>> What is Apache OpenOffice?
>> 
>> change:
>> Apache OpenOffice is portabel :
>> to:
>> Apache OpenOffice is portable :
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Carl
>> 
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