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From sebb <seb...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: svn commit: r1816997 - /infrastructure/site/trunk/content/index.page/acna_center.mdtext
Date Sun, 03 Dec 2017 12:06:48 GMT
On 2 December 2017 at 22:30,  <pono@apache.org> wrote:
> Author: pono
> Date: Sat Dec  2 22:30:14 2017
> New Revision: 1816997
>
> URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1816997&view=rev
> Log:
> add link
>
> Modified:
>     infrastructure/site/trunk/content/index.page/acna_center.mdtext
>
> Modified: infrastructure/site/trunk/content/index.page/acna_center.mdtext
> URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/infrastructure/site/trunk/content/index.page/acna_center.mdtext?rev=1816997&r1=1816996&r2=1816997&view=diff
> ==============================================================================
> --- infrastructure/site/trunk/content/index.page/acna_center.mdtext (original)
> +++ infrastructure/site/trunk/content/index.page/acna_center.mdtext Sat Dec  2 22:30:14
2017
> @@ -26,6 +26,6 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
>  <b class="tab">"The Apache Software Foundation is a cornerstone of the modern
Open Source software ecosystem – supporting some of the most widely used and important
software solutions powering today's Internet economy."
>  — Mark Driver, Research Vice President, Gartner
>  </b>
> -<p>Lauded among the most successful influencers in Open Source, The Apache Software
Foundation's commitment to collaborative development has long served as a model for producing
consistently high quality software that advances the future of open development. https://s.apache.org/PIRA</p>
> +<p>Lauded among the most successful influencers in Open Source, The Apache Software
Foundation's commitment to collaborative development has long served as a model for producing
consistently high quality software that advances the future of open development. <a href="https://s.apache.org/PIRA">https://s.apache.org/PIRA</a></p>

"Lauded among the most successful influencers ..."

That does not read well to me.

It could perhaps be reworded as:

"Lauded as one of the most successful influencers ..."

or just

"One of the most successful influencers ..."


>  </p>
> \ No newline at end of file
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