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From Claude Brisson <cla...@renegat.net>
Subject Re: Logo Proposition for VelocityTools
Date Sat, 15 Dec 2007 05:19:24 GMT
Some more -subjetive- feeback :

I really prefer the T of the first version - much softer and lighter.
And colors were good. Sthing very heavy in the second proposal, whereas
the first one recalls me of sthing inbetween of a conceptual
contemporary art artefact and a glass of wine... necessarily
sympatico... subjective, I told you... what about working around the
first proposal in the way I suggest here (only poorly crafted by means
of ugly cuts and pastes from you image):

http://people.apache.org/~cbrisson/ApacheVelocityTools.png


   Claude

Le mercredi 12 décembre 2007 à 17:54 -0800, Edward a écrit :
> Hi,
> 
> Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version:
> [image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner]
> and a link for those who can't see it:
> http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png
> 
> I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a
> tongue :P (See the resemblance?)
> 
> Also, here it is with the current template:
> 
> http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png
> 
> The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you
> could see the details.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Edward
> On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna <nbubna@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> > Hey Edward,
> >
> > That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second
> > to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset.  The T is
> > particularly hard to recognize.  Still, the symbol looks a lot
> > snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still
> > out there Tim Colson :).   I do think the color scheme could use some
> > adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now.  I attached a
> > screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that.
> >
> > I think that's it for stylistic feedback.  I'm not really the best at
> > that.  Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could
> > probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to
> > make better use of its space.
> >
> > Thanks for working on this!  I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! :)
> >
> > peace,
> > nathan
> >
> > On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward <are.you.cursed@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > Hello All,
> > >
> > > I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the Velocity
> > > Tools logo.
> > >
> > > Here is my proposition so far:
> > >
> > > [image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner]
> > >
> > > In case the image doesn't show:
> > >
> > >
> > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png
> > >
> > > Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to
> > start us
> > > off with.
> > >
> > > Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work.
> > (Example:
> > > Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.)
> > >
> > >
> > > Regards,
> > >
> > > Edward
> > >
> > >
> > http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52
> > >
> >
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> 
> 


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