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From: "Caldarale, Charles R" <Chuck.Caldarale@unisys.com>
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Subject: RE: Simple Tomcat 6, servlet tutorial. First draft for comment
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> From: Dave Pawson [mailto:dave.pawson@gmail.com]
> Subject: Simple Tomcat 6, servlet tutorial. First draft for comment
>
> http://www.dpawson.co.uk/tomcat

Looks pretty good.  Some nits to pick:

Under "Compile the restlet example code", you include catalina.jar and tomc=
at-juli.jar; neither of these should be necessary to compile a servlet.  If=
 they are necessary, there's something wrong with the servlet, since it's m=
aking use of Tomcat internals.

The directory structure created in "Tell Tomcat about our servlet" appears =
in the section above; looks like something's out of order or at least mispl=
aced here.

I would not include the comment about valves within the <Context> element; =
it will only provoke questions and confusion from the uninitiated.

Under "Add the jars", you use the phrase "unpack the following jars"; that =
could be construed as taking those jars apart to get the individual class f=
iles.  Perhaps something like "extract the following jars from the zip file=
:" would be clearer.

 - Chuck


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