From commits-return-36506-archive-asf-public=cust-asf.ponee.io@tinkerpop.apache.org Mon Jun 17 16:14:07 2019 Return-Path: X-Original-To: archive-asf-public@cust-asf.ponee.io Delivered-To: archive-asf-public@cust-asf.ponee.io Received: from mail.apache.org (hermes.apache.org [207.244.88.153]) by mx-eu-01.ponee.io (Postfix) with SMTP id A701718077A for ; Mon, 17 Jun 2019 18:14:07 +0200 (CEST) Received: (qmail 96283 invoked by uid 500); 17 Jun 2019 16:14:07 -0000 Mailing-List: contact commits-help@tinkerpop.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: dev@tinkerpop.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list commits@tinkerpop.apache.org Received: (qmail 96274 invoked by uid 99); 17 Jun 2019 16:14:07 -0000 Received: from ec2-52-202-80-70.compute-1.amazonaws.com (HELO gitbox.apache.org) (52.202.80.70) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Mon, 17 Jun 2019 16:14:07 +0000 Received: by gitbox.apache.org (ASF Mail Server at gitbox.apache.org, from userid 33) id 2B6E787AD8; Mon, 17 Jun 2019 16:14:06 +0000 (UTC) Date: Mon, 17 Jun 2019 16:14:07 +0000 To: "commits@tinkerpop.apache.org" Subject: [tinkerpop] 01/03: Minor re-wording for clarity in getting started tutorial CTR MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit From: spmallette@apache.org In-Reply-To: <156078804601.21649.16105296085828762867@gitbox.apache.org> References: <156078804601.21649.16105296085828762867@gitbox.apache.org> X-Git-Host: gitbox.apache.org X-Git-Repo: tinkerpop X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/master X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Rev: 0d08d242732a635a47d7a8d2d712cefa778e0840 X-Git-NotificationType: diff X-Git-Multimail-Version: 1.5.dev Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Message-Id: <20190617161406.2B6E787AD8@gitbox.apache.org> This is an automated email from the ASF dual-hosted git repository. spmallette pushed a commit to branch master in repository https://gitbox.apache.org/repos/asf/tinkerpop.git commit 0d08d242732a635a47d7a8d2d712cefa778e0840 Author: Stephen Mallette AuthorDate: Mon Jun 17 12:12:12 2019 -0400 Minor re-wording for clarity in getting started tutorial CTR --- docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc b/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc index 42aed0f..d03535e 100644 --- a/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc +++ b/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc @@ -380,9 +380,10 @@ g.V().has('name','marko'). values('name') ---- -So that's nice, we can see that "peter", "josh" and "marko" are all responsible for creating "lop". Of course, we already -know about the involvement of "marko" and it seems strange to say that "marko" collaborates with himself, so excluding -"marko" from the results seems logical. The following traversal handles that exclusion: +So that's nice, we can see that "peter", "josh" and "marko" are all responsible for creating "v[3]", which is the +"software" vertex named "lop". Of course, we already know about the involvement of "marko" and it seems strange to say that +"marko" collaborates with himself, so excluding "marko" from the results seems logical. The following traversal +handles that exclusion: [gremlin-groovy,modern] ---- @@ -444,8 +445,8 @@ graph computing. == The Final Ten Minutes In these final ten minutes of _The TinkerPop Workout - by Gremlin_ we'll look at TinkerPop from a higher level and -introduce different features of the stack in order to orient you with what it offers. In this way, you can -identify areas of interest and dig into the details from there. +introduce different features it provides to help orient you to some of the project's technology ecosystem. In this +way, you can identify areas of interest and dig into the details from there. === Why TinkerPop?