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From spmalle...@apache.org
Subject [tinkerpop] 01/03: Minor re-wording for clarity in getting started tutorial CTR
Date Mon, 17 Jun 2019 16:14:07 GMT
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commit 0d08d242732a635a47d7a8d2d712cefa778e0840
Author: Stephen Mallette <spmva@genoprime.com>
AuthorDate: Mon Jun 17 12:12:12 2019 -0400

    Minor re-wording for clarity in getting started tutorial CTR
---
 docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc b/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc
index 42aed0f..d03535e 100644
--- a/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc
+++ b/docs/src/tutorials/getting-started/index.asciidoc
@@ -380,9 +380,10 @@ g.V().has('name','marko').
   values('name')
 ----
 
-So that's nice, we can see that "peter", "josh" and "marko" are all responsible for creating
"lop". Of course, we already
-know about the involvement of "marko" and it seems strange to say that "marko" collaborates
with himself, so excluding
-"marko" from the results seems logical. The following traversal handles that exclusion:
+So that's nice, we can see that "peter", "josh" and "marko" are all responsible for creating
"v[3]", which is the
+"software" vertex named "lop". Of course, we already know about the involvement of "marko"
and it seems strange to say that
+"marko" collaborates with himself, so excluding "marko" from the results seems logical. The
following traversal
+handles that exclusion:
 
 [gremlin-groovy,modern]
 ----
@@ -444,8 +445,8 @@ graph computing.
 == The Final Ten Minutes
 
 In these final ten minutes of _The TinkerPop Workout - by Gremlin_ we'll look at TinkerPop
from a higher level and
-introduce different features of the stack in order to orient you with what it offers. In
this way, you can
-identify areas of interest and dig into the details from there.
+introduce different features it provides to help orient you to some of the project's technology
ecosystem. In this
+way, you can identify areas of interest and dig into the details from there.
 
 === Why TinkerPop?
 


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