From commits-return-26543-archive-asf-public=cust-asf.ponee.io@pulsar.apache.org Thu Apr 11 10:19:23 2019 Return-Path: X-Original-To: archive-asf-public@cust-asf.ponee.io Delivered-To: archive-asf-public@cust-asf.ponee.io Received: from mail.apache.org (hermes.apache.org [207.244.88.153]) by mx-eu-01.ponee.io (Postfix) with SMTP id F2F8C18065D for ; Thu, 11 Apr 2019 12:19:22 +0200 (CEST) Received: (qmail 57279 invoked by uid 500); 11 Apr 2019 10:19:22 -0000 Mailing-List: contact commits-help@pulsar.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: dev@pulsar.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list commits@pulsar.apache.org Received: (qmail 57267 invoked by uid 99); 11 Apr 2019 10:19:22 -0000 Received: from ec2-52-202-80-70.compute-1.amazonaws.com (HELO gitbox.apache.org) (52.202.80.70) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Thu, 11 Apr 2019 10:19:22 +0000 From: GitBox To: commits@pulsar.apache.org Subject: [GitHub] [pulsar] Jennifer88huang opened a new pull request #4026: [Doc] Update site2/docs/concepts-overview.md file Message-ID: <155497796222.15724.13906454339686378958.gitbox@gitbox.apache.org> Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2019 10:19:22 -0000 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Jennifer88huang opened a new pull request #4026: [Doc] Update site2/docs/concepts-overview.md file URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/4026 ### Motivation Some sentences in this file is not quite clear. I'm trying to make it easy to read and understand. ### Modifications 1. Refine some sentences to be a little more smooth. 2. Avoid using ’s to show the possessive form of inanimate objects. 3. Add periods for all lists. It is to keep styles consistent. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: users@infra.apache.org With regards, Apache Git Services