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From "Philip M. Gollucci" <phi...@p6m7g8.com>
Subject Wording fix
Date Tue, 04 Mar 2003 00:29:01 GMT
At the very least this one below.  I think the whole first sentence (or 
attempt at rather) needs rewording. I believe correct english wold be 
";therefore"

I best guess is split it to at least 2 sentences, but not quite sure what 
wording would be good.

[ttyp5] philip@p6m7g8.com 
/home/philip/Developement/src/modperl-docs/src/outstanding rv=1 45 >cvs diff 
-u sites.html
Index: sites.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/cvspublic/modperl-docs/src/outstanding/sites.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -u -r1.13 sites.html
--- sites.html  5 Dec 2002 02:37:54 -0000       1.13
+++ sites.html  4 Mar 2003 05:25:19 -0000
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 <p>
 Also remember that many services are using mod_perl as their
 back-end, therefore these aren't reported by Netcraft, since the
-back-ends are usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
+back-ends usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
 the same reason, if you try to verify whether some of the services
 listed here are running mod_perl, you may not be able to, because the
 back-end is not accessible. The listing is made of reports from people

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