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From "Jonathan M. Hollin" <netmas...@digital-word.com>
Subject RE: Grammar Advisory
Date Mon, 15 Apr 2002 22:22:20 GMT
>I think it should be rewritten more like:
>
>  Mod_perl is the power behind many of the Internet's busiest and 
>  most advanced web sites.  Listed here are success stories from 
>  people using mod_perl...
>
>Something will a little stronger language.  
>
>What do you think?  I'm not a writer, but I hope you get what 
>I'm saying.

I like where you're coming from Bill.  To your text I would add:

Mod_perl is the power behind many of the Internet's busiest and most
advanced web sites.  Listed here are success stories from people using
mod_perl; also, world-wide statistics of mod_perl usage

>I know I've said this before, but "Technologie Extraordinaire" 
>still sounds funny to me.

:-)


Jonathan M. Hollin - WYPUG Co-ordinator

West Yorkshire Perl User Group
http://wypug.pm.org/
http://wypug.digital-word.com/


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