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From Marcus <marcus.m...@wtnet.de>
Subject Re: Error on your web site
Date Wed, 29 Mar 2017 21:45:31 GMT
Am 29.03.2017 um 20:58 schrieb tolleson@dltolleson.com:
> Thanks for letting me know.
>
> I would point out, [...]

I'm confused. Is this just a further comment on the sentence in 
question? Or do you want to suggest a further change? If the later one, 
then I've not understood what you want to express.

Maybe t's because I'm not a native speaker. ;-)

Thanks

Marcus



> On Wed, Mar 29, 2017 at 12:55 PM,
> ​> wrote:
>
>     Am 29.03.2017 um 16:24 schrieb tolleson@dltolleson.com
>     <mailto:tolleson@dltolleson.com>:
>
>         Just wanted to bring your attention an error on the OpenOffice
>         web site.
>
>         The error is on this page...
>         https://openoffice.apache.org/get-involved.html
>         <https://openoffice.apache.org/get-involved.html>
>
>         The error is under the heading, "A multidisciplinary open source
>         project"
>         and is the second item in the list of people that your
>         organization is
>         looking for.
>
>         The text at issue now reads...
>         • Write or existing documentation, also with technical topics
>
>         I would suggest using one of the following...
>
>         • Write on existing documentation and technical topics
>         Or
>         • Rewrite existing documentation and technical topics
>
>         Or my personal favorite...
>         • Improve existing documentation and technical topics
>
>         You guys have a great product and I hope this helps in a small way,
>
>
>     thanks for your hint. To keep the change minimal I've changed it in
>     the following way:
>
>     "Write new or improve existing documentation, also with technical
>     topics"
>
>     Marcus


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