Am 29.03.2017 um 20:58 schrieb tolleson@dltolleson.com:
> Thanks for letting me know.
>
> I would point out, [...]
I'm confused. Is this just a further comment on the sentence in
question? Or do you want to suggest a further change? If the later one,
then I've not understood what you want to express.
Maybe t's because I'm not a native speaker. ;-)
Thanks
Marcus
> On Wed, Mar 29, 2017 at 12:55 PM,
> > wrote:
>
> Am 29.03.2017 um 16:24 schrieb tolleson@dltolleson.com
> <mailto:tolleson@dltolleson.com>:
>
> Just wanted to bring your attention an error on the OpenOffice
> web site.
>
> The error is on this page...
> https://openoffice.apache.org/get-involved.html
> <https://openoffice.apache.org/get-involved.html>
>
> The error is under the heading, "A multidisciplinary open source
> project"
> and is the second item in the list of people that your
> organization is
> looking for.
>
> The text at issue now reads...
> • Write or existing documentation, also with technical topics
>
> I would suggest using one of the following...
>
> • Write on existing documentation and technical topics
> Or
> • Rewrite existing documentation and technical topics
>
> Or my personal favorite...
> • Improve existing documentation and technical topics
>
> You guys have a great product and I hope this helps in a small way,
>
>
> thanks for your hint. To keep the change minimal I've changed it in
> the following way:
>
> "Write new or improve existing documentation, also with technical
> topics"
>
> Marcus
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