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From Marcus <marcus.m...@wtnet.de>
Subject Re: Editing Download page
Date Sun, 24 Jul 2016 19:47:29 GMT
Am 07/24/2016 06:25 PM, schrieb Dennis E. Hamilton:
> Marcus,
>
> A little correction here and there ...
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Marcus [mailto:marcus.mail@wtnet.de]
>> My technical additions need a bit more time but in the meantime here are
>> my text suggestions:
>>
>> Box headline:
>> "Developers Needed"
>>
>> Box text:
>> "Are you a software developer with C++ skills or have you deeper
>> knowledge about building software? Do you like to work in open source
>> projects and you are familar with the English language? Then come to us
>> and help Apache OpenOffice to grow."
> [orcmid]
>
> s/you are familiar/are you familiar/
>
> or maybe better, "are you proficient in English?
>
> s/Then come/Come/
>
> s/to grow/expand/
>
>>
>> Box mouse-over:
>> "The Apache OpenOffice project need software developers to grow its
>> base"
> [orcmid]
>
> s/need/needs/
>
> Or how about,
>
>   "The Apache OpenOffice project seeks developers to take part in expanding its activities."

OK, sounds better. I'vr also changed the other things.

> and I would like to see more discussion too.

Then I'll keep the things in staging. When someone thinks it's ready, 
then just publish it in the CMS.

>> Not perfect but a start - for discussion and improvement.

For further ideas you just need to change the "orange" properties in 
"w.oo.o/dl/msg_prop_l10n_en.js". Or I can do it tomorrow.

Marcus


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