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Subject: svn commit: r1533671 -
 /openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/calc.mdtext
Date: Sat, 19 Oct 2013 00:40:23 -0000
To: commits@openoffice.apache.org
From: smansour@apache.org
Message-Id: <20131019004023.7947E2388980@eris.apache.org>

Author: smansour
Date: Sat Oct 19 00:40:23 2013
New Revision: 1533671

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1533671
Log:
Changed language and changed points to state feature at the beginning of the sentence (more obvious to user).

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/calc.mdtext

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/calc.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/calc.mdtext?rev=1533671&r1=1533670&r2=1533671&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/calc.mdtext (original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/calc.mdtext Sat Oct 19 00:40:23 2013
@@ -18,23 +18,23 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
 
 [![Screendump of Apache OpenOffice Calc](/product/pix/calc.png)](/product/pix/calc-big.png "Click for bigger version") # {.rfloatimg}
 
-*The all-purpose spreadsheet*
+*The solution to storing all your numbers and lists!*
 
-**Calc** is the spreadsheet program you've always wanted. Newcomers find it
+**Calc** is the spreadsheet application you've always wanted. Newcomers find it
 intuitive and easy to learn; professional data miners and number crunchers will
 appreciate the comprehensive range of advanced functions.
 
-Advanced *DataPilot* technology makes it easy to pull in raw data from corporate
+*DataPilot* is an advanced technology that makes it easy to pull in raw data from corporate
 databases; cross-tabulate, summarize, and convert it into meaningful information.
 
 *Natural language formulas* let you create formulas using words (e.g. "sales -
 costs").
 
-The *Intelligent Sum Button* inserts a sum function or a subtotal automatically,
+*Intelligent Sum Button* inserts a sum function or a subtotal automatically,
 depending on context.
 
 *Wizards* guides you through choosing and using a comprehensive range of
-advanced spreadsheet functions, or [download templates][1] from our  Extensions
+advanced spreadsheet functions, or [download templates][1] from our Templates
 repository for ready-made spreadsheet solutions.
 
 *Styles and Formatting* makes it easy to apply flexible cell formatting options,
@@ -45,25 +45,26 @@ functions, allowing you to concentrate o
 *Scenario Manager* allows "what if ..." analysis at the touch of a button - e.g.
 compare profitability for high / medium / low sales forecasts.
 
-**Calc**'s *solver* component allows solving optimization problems where the
+Calc's *solver* component allows solving optimization problems where the
 optimum value of a particular spreadsheet cell has to be calculated based on
 constraints provided in other cells.
 
-Encourage collaborative working on spreadsheets with **Calc**'s multiple users
-support. By sharing a spreadsheet other users can easily add their data to the
+*Multiple users support* - Encourage collaborative work on spreadsheets. 
+By sharing a spreadsheet, other users can easily add their data to the
 spreadsheet. The spreadsheet owner can then easily integrate the new data with a
 few clicks. This collaboration feature helps avoid editing conflicts.
 
 Save your spreadsheets in OpenDocument format, the new international standard
 for office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied in to
-**Calc**. You can access your spreadsheets from any OpenDocument compliant
+Calc. You can access your spreadsheets from any OpenDocument compliant
 software.
 
-Of course, you are free to use your old Microsoft Excel spreadsheets, or save
-your work in Excel format for sending to people who are still locked into
-Microsoft products. If all they want to see is your results, then use Portable
-Document Format (.pdf) - no need to buy any extra software. Since version 3.0,
-**Calc** has been able to read .xlsx files created with Microsoft Office 2007 or
+You are free to import your old Microsoft Excel spreadsheets, or save
+your work in Excel format for sending to people who are using Microsoft products.
+Calc is able to read .xlsx files created with Microsoft Office 2007 or
 Microsoft Office 2008 for Mac OS X.
 
+If you want to send your results to someone who doesn't have a spreadsheet application installed, 
+then use Portable Document Format (.pdf) - no need to buy or install any extra software. 
+
 [1]: http://extensions.openoffice.org/templates "Download Apache OpenOffice Templates"