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Subject: svn commit: r1808115 -
 /jena/site/trunk/content/documentation/tdb/dynamic_datasets.mdtext
Date: Tue, 12 Sep 2017 13:36:59 -0000
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Author: ajs6f
Date: Tue Sep 12 13:36:59 2017
New Revision: 1808115

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1808115&view=rev
Log:
fixed typo and slight edits for readability

Modified:
    jena/site/trunk/content/documentation/tdb/dynamic_datasets.mdtext

Modified: jena/site/trunk/content/documentation/tdb/dynamic_datasets.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/jena/site/trunk/content/documentation/tdb/dynamic_datasets.mdtext?rev=1808115&r1=1808114&r2=1808115&view=diff
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--- jena/site/trunk/content/documentation/tdb/dynamic_datasets.mdtext (original)
+++ jena/site/trunk/content/documentation/tdb/dynamic_datasets.mdtext Tue Sep 12 13:36:59 2017
@@ -15,19 +15,19 @@ dataset. The FROM clauses define the gra
 the default graph, and the FROM NAMED clauses identify the graphs
 to be included as named graphs.
 
-Normally, ARQ interprets these as coming from the web, that is the
+Normally, ARQ interprets these as coming from the web; the
 graphs are read using HTTP GET. TDB modifies this behaviour; instead
-of the universe of graphs being the web, the universe of graph is
+of the universe of graphs being the web, the universe of graphs is
 the TDB data store. FROM and FROM NAMED describe a dataset with
 graphs drawn only from the TDB data store.
 
 -   Using one or more FROM clauses, causes the default graph of the 
     dataset to be the union of those graphs.
 -   Using one or more FROM NAMED, with no FROM in a query,
-    causes an empty default graph to be used for the default graph.
+    causes an empty graph to be used for the default graph.
 -   Using one or more FROM NAMED, with no FROM in a query, where the the symbol
     [`TDB.symUnionDefaultGraph`](configuration.html)
-    is also set, then the default graph is set union of all the named
+    is also set, causes the default graph to be the set union of all the named
     graphs (FROM NAMED).
 
 Example