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From bbuff...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r553690 - /incubator/xap/site/docs/xmodify/content/sendmeapic.html
Date Fri, 06 Jul 2007 01:35:35 GMT
Author: bbuffone
Date: Thu Jul  5 18:35:34 2007
New Revision: 553690

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=553690
Log:
fixed several typos.

Modified:
    incubator/xap/site/docs/xmodify/content/sendmeapic.html

Modified: incubator/xap/site/docs/xmodify/content/sendmeapic.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/xap/site/docs/xmodify/content/sendmeapic.html?view=diff&rev=553690&r1=553689&r2=553690
==============================================================================
--- incubator/xap/site/docs/xmodify/content/sendmeapic.html (original)
+++ incubator/xap/site/docs/xmodify/content/sendmeapic.html Thu Jul  5 18:35:34 2007
@@ -26,19 +26,20 @@
 utilizes xModify to page the display of the image grid.  This is a 
 perfect example of an application that can utilize xModify to make it easy to page data.
Send me a pic
 loads data from flickr.com to via a server request them process the information into an xModify
XML document.
-When the XAP client receives the response to the page request XAP will execute the instructions
in any modification
+When the XAP client receives the response to the page request, XAP will execute the operations
in any modification
 block.
  
 <p><h2><span class="Title">Images</span></h2></p>
 <p align="center"><img src="../images/initial-screen.gif"></p>
 <p>
-	The initial screen to the application display the process of loading images and send them
to a cell phone.  Once a
-	user click a popular search or types in the search field and clicks "Submit Query" the screen
will transition to
-	the next screen that display the results of the query.
+	The initial screen to the application displays the process of loading images and sends them
to a cell phone.  Once a
+	user click a popular search link or types in the search field and clicks "Submit Query"
the page will transition to
+	the next screen that displays the results of the query.
 </p>
 <p align="center"><img src="../images/initial-search.gif"></p>
 <p>
-	Users can page through the image using the "Prev" and "Next" buttons.	Once the buttons is
clicked that 
+	Users can page through the image using the "Prev" and "Next" buttons.	Once the buttons is
clicked, the user will be 
+	told that the data is being loaded, and the new page of data will be fetched. 
 </p>
 
 <p><h2><span class="Title">Create the application</span></h2></p>
@@ -59,7 +60,7 @@
 	
 	&lt;script&gt;
 		//keep a reference to the application that was created
-		//will use it later to execute a xModify.
+		//we will use it later to execute a xModify.
 		var myApp = null;
 		
 		function createXap(){
@@ -80,8 +81,8 @@
 <p>
 	This is a two step process; 
 	<ul>
-		<li>from the buttons call the JavaScript methods</li>
-		<li>call the fireEvent function on the XAP application reference</li>
+		<li>From the buttons onclick event call a JavaScript function</li>
+		<li>In the JavaScript function call the fireEvent function on the XAP application
reference</li>
 	</ul>
 </p>
 
@@ -113,8 +114,8 @@
 		}
 
 		function searchFlickr(searchValue, page){
-			//If the search value is null pull it out of the search value
-			//Input field.
+			//If the search value is null, pull it out of 
+			//the search value input field.
 			if (searchValue == null){
 				searchValue = document.getElementById("search2").value;
 			}
@@ -137,15 +138,15 @@
 		
 </pre>
 
-<div>That is the complete set of JavaScript, xModify make the paging of the data very
easy.  The underlying XAP engine
-handles the execution of the xModify instructions.</div>	
+<div>That is the complete set of JavaScript for paging data, xModify operations will
handle the paging. The underlying XAP engine
+handles the execution of the xModify operations.</div>	
 </p>
 
 <p><h2><span class="Title">xModify Script</span></h2></p>
 <p>
-	<p>The retieving of information from flick is handled on the application host server
using
-	PHP. Once the fireEvent function is called XAP will make an an asynchronous request to the

-	URL.  The response to the request is an XML document that has xModify instruction.</p>
+	<p>The retieving of information from flick is handled on the application's host server
using
+	PHP. Once the fireEvent function is called, XAP will make an an asynchronous request to
the 
+	URL.  The response to the request is an XML document that has xModify operations.</p>
 	<div><b>php/flickr-xm.php.</b></div>
 	
 <pre>
@@ -154,14 +155,14 @@
     xmlns:xm="http://www.openxal.org/xmodify"&gt;
 
 	&lt;!-- 
-		The instrustion will be run against the html document.  This is
+		The operations will be run against the html document.  This is
 		denoted by the document="html" attribute of the modifications tag
 	 --&gt;
     &lt;xm:modifications document="html"&gt;	
 	
 		
 		&lt;!-- 
-			The first instruction is to set the inner HTML of the 
+			The first operation is to set the inner HTML of the 
 			photoPanel div to be the contents of the CDATA block.
 			I used the CDATA block to minimize the number of dom nodes, and
 			because I will be converting it to a string.
@@ -213,9 +214,9 @@
 		&lt;/xm:set-innerhtml&gt;
 		
 		&lt;!-- 
-			The second instruction is to set the inner HTML of the 
+			The second operation is to set the inner HTML of the 
 			searchBar div to be the contents of the CDATA block.  The results
-			of this instruction will be the displaying the current page and total
+			of this operation will be the displaying the current page and total
 			number of pages for the query string provided.
 		--&gt;
 		&lt;xm:set-innerhtml select="id('searchBar')"&gt;&lt;![CDATA[&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
@@ -246,7 +247,8 @@
 	To get start with XAP, go to the <a href="../../../download.html" target="_top">download</a>
page.  After you unzip the
 	achive file you can place the contents of the dist diretory into your application.
 	
-	Any questions on this or anything else about XAP
+	Any questions on this or anything else about XAP, can be anwsered by submitting question
to the XAP email list.  Go to <a href="../../../gettinghelp.html">Getting Help</a>
page for 
+	more information on XAP feedback and mailing lists.
 </p>
 <!-- end: body of page -->
 </div>



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