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From Ali Lown <...@lown.me.uk>
Subject Re: Web Site
Date Tue, 12 Jun 2012 19:21:13 GMT
Looks better.
Having the menu on the left also makes the logo's white background fit
better with the page. The command boxes help tidy the page too.

I can see 'reposiotyr' in the text though...

Ali

On 12 June 2012 20:18, Michael MacFadden <michael.macfadden@gmail.com> wrote:
> More updates:
>
> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html
>
> On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote:
>
>> Great work Michael, thanks.
>> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is that
>> it should be on top.
>>
>> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <ali@lown.me.uk> wrote:
>>
>>> Michael,
>>>
>>> Style:
>>> ---------
>>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that
>>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not
>>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right).
>>>
>>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white
>>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo
>>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change
>>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a
>>> light grey (#eee)?
>>>
>>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me
>>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently?
>>>
>>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so
>>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space?
>>>
>>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I
>>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them
>>> from the text.
>>>
>>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency:
>>> ----------------------------------------------------
>>> Home page:
>>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed'
>>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative'
>>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless'
>>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid'
>>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and
>>> Gadgets'
>>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform'
>>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability'
>>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB'
>>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation'
>>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related'
>>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project'
>>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation'
>>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community'
>>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved'
>>>
>>> About page:
>>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol'
>>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create
>>> an integrated'
>>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email'
>>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally'
>>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies'
>>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well'
>>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand'
>>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying'
>>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it'
>>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a
>>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own
>>> server'
>>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase
>>> "FedOne" as a reference'
>>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur'
>>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box'
>>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses'
>>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people'
>>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus'
>>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box'
>>>
>>> Getting Involved page:
>>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved'
>>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest'
>>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the'
>>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the
>>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we
>>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and
>>> consider the health of the community.'
>>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements'
>>>
>>> Mailing Lists page:
>>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code'
>>> 'collectiely' -> collectively'
>>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list'
>>>
>>> Demo Servers page:
>>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability'
>>>
>>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :)
>>> Ali
>>>
>>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <michael.macfadden@gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>> All,
>>>>
>>>> I have made some updates to the web site.  They can be viewed in the
>>> staging build here:
>>>>
>>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html
>>>>
>>>> Let me know what you think.  I will publish these changes after I get
>>> some feedback.  There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this looks
>>> a little nicer than what I had done before.
>>>>
>>>> ~Michael
>>>
>

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