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From Michael MacFadden <michael.macfad...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Web Site
Date Sun, 17 Jun 2012 22:37:12 GMT
it seems like ci.apache.org is down right now.  It might take some time for the site to get
to the production server.

~Michael

On Jun 12, 2012, at 12:30 PM, Ali Lown wrote:

> Might I suggest you simply proof-read instead? Spell checkers are
> always a bit of a curse with respect to actually getting the correct
> spellings!
> 
> PS. Nope, I am not a graphic designer.
> 
> On 12 June 2012 20:28, Michael MacFadden <michael.macfadden@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Great.  I just added a few more changes....fixed the typo.  I need to get spell check
working in vim.  lol.
>> 
>> 
>> On Jun 12, 2012, at 12:21 PM, Ali Lown wrote:
>> 
>>> Looks better.
>>> Having the menu on the left also makes the logo's white background fit
>>> better with the page. The command boxes help tidy the page too.
>>> 
>>> I can see 'reposiotyr' in the text though...
>>> 
>>> Ali
>>> 
>>> On 12 June 2012 20:18, Michael MacFadden <michael.macfadden@gmail.com>
wrote:
>>>> More updates:
>>>> 
>>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html
>>>> 
>>>> On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>> Great work Michael, thanks.
>>>>> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is
that
>>>>> it should be on top.
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <ali@lown.me.uk> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>>> Michael,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Style:
>>>>>> ---------
>>>>>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that
>>>>>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not
>>>>>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right).
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white
>>>>>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo
>>>>>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change
>>>>>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a
>>>>>> light grey (#eee)?
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me
>>>>>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently?
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image
so
>>>>>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space?
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might
I
>>>>>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate
them
>>>>>> from the text.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency:
>>>>>> ----------------------------------------------------
>>>>>> Home page:
>>>>>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed'
>>>>>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative'
>>>>>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless'
>>>>>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid'
>>>>>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots
and
>>>>>> Gadgets'
>>>>>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform'
>>>>>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability'
>>>>>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB'
>>>>>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation'
>>>>>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related'
>>>>>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project'
>>>>>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation'
>>>>>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community'
>>>>>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting
Involved'
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> About page:
>>>>>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol'
>>>>>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to
create
>>>>>> an integrated'
>>>>>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email'
>>>>>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally'
>>>>>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies'
>>>>>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well'
>>>>>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand'
>>>>>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying'
>>>>>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported
it'
>>>>>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant
to be a
>>>>>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own
>>>>>> server'
>>>>>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase
>>>>>> "FedOne" as a reference'
>>>>>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur'
>>>>>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box'
>>>>>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses'
>>>>>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people'
>>>>>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus'
>>>>>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box'
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Getting Involved page:
>>>>>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved'
>>>>>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest'
>>>>>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the'
>>>>>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for
the
>>>>>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where
we
>>>>>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and
>>>>>> consider the health of the community.'
>>>>>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements'
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Mailing Lists page:
>>>>>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code'
>>>>>> 'collectiely' -> collectively'
>>>>>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list'
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Demo Servers page:
>>>>>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability'
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :)
>>>>>> Ali
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <michael.macfadden@gmail.com>
>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>> All,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I have made some updates to the web site.  They can be viewed
in the
>>>>>> staging build here:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Let me know what you think.  I will publish these changes after
I get
>>>>>> some feedback.  There is more work to be done (lots) but I think
this looks
>>>>>> a little nicer than what I had done before.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> ~Michael
>>>>>> 
>>>> 
>> 


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