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From Michael MacFadden <michael.macfad...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Web Site
Date Tue, 12 Jun 2012 19:18:21 GMT
More updates:

http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html

On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote:

> Great work Michael, thanks.
> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is that
> it should be on top.
> 
> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <ali@lown.me.uk> wrote:
> 
>> Michael,
>> 
>> Style:
>> ---------
>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that
>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not
>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right).
>> 
>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white
>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo
>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change
>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a
>> light grey (#eee)?
>> 
>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me
>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently?
>> 
>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so
>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space?
>> 
>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I
>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them
>> from the text.
>> 
>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency:
>> ----------------------------------------------------
>> Home page:
>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed'
>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative'
>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless'
>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid'
>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and
>> Gadgets'
>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform'
>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability'
>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB'
>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation'
>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related'
>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project'
>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation'
>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community'
>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved'
>> 
>> About page:
>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol'
>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create
>> an integrated'
>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email'
>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally'
>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies'
>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well'
>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand'
>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying'
>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it'
>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a
>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own
>> server'
>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase
>> "FedOne" as a reference'
>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur'
>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box'
>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses'
>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people'
>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus'
>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box'
>> 
>> Getting Involved page:
>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved'
>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest'
>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the'
>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the
>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we
>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and
>> consider the health of the community.'
>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements'
>> 
>> Mailing Lists page:
>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code'
>> 'collectiely' -> collectively'
>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list'
>> 
>> Demo Servers page:
>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability'
>> 
>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :)
>> Ali
>> 
>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <michael.macfadden@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>> All,
>>> 
>>> I have made some updates to the web site.  They can be viewed in the
>> staging build here:
>>> 
>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html
>>> 
>>> Let me know what you think.  I will publish these changes after I get
>> some feedback.  There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this looks
>> a little nicer than what I had done before.
>>> 
>>> ~Michael
>> 


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