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From strou...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1310536 - /incubator/tashi/board/2012-04.txt
Date Fri, 06 Apr 2012 18:39:40 GMT
Author: stroucki
Date: Fri Apr  6 18:39:39 2012
New Revision: 1310536

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1310536&view=rev
Log:
Brush over several bits of the prose

Modified:
    incubator/tashi/board/2012-04.txt

Modified: incubator/tashi/board/2012-04.txt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/tashi/board/2012-04.txt?rev=1310536&r1=1310535&r2=1310536&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/tashi/board/2012-04.txt (original)
+++ incubator/tashi/board/2012-04.txt Fri Apr  6 18:39:39 2012
@@ -13,16 +13,15 @@ using Xen and QEMU, but has been merged 
 physical aspects of a cluster like power control, network settings and 
 handing out physical machines.
 
-In the period from January to April, the project has received permission
-to publish a release. Shortly thereafter, a subsequent release was
+In the period from January to April, the project had received permission
+to publish a release. Shortly thereafter, a further release was
 approved, incorporating several bug fixes detected during deployment
-of the first release and bug reports on Jira.
+of the first release and from Jira reports.
 
 In the process of making our first release, contact to two of our three
 mentors was re-established. The third mentor has not been heard from
 (also in other parts of Apache) for quite a while. We obtained sufficient
-administrative access to Jira, which was previously inaccessible to us
-due to insufficient privileges.
+administrative access to Jira to manage our problem reports.
 
 Development efforts this period have mainly been in adding resilience
 to Tashi components, as well as returning more helpful messages in case
@@ -31,17 +30,17 @@ have been removed.
 
 Upcoming software goals are to investigate what is needed to support IPv6,
 considering replacement for RPyC and providing the ability to hand
-out server slices.
+out server slices (operating system level virtualization).
 
 The project has a user community, but it is small. Growth mostly has
-happened by word of mouth to now. To show potential users at large the
+happened by word of mouth. To show potential users at large the
 utility of this project, the author of this report will apply some of
 the advice posted to general@apache.incubator.org, as well as create
 web pages demonstrating the project's utility, provide sample VM images
 and disseminate other information relating to the deployments close to him.
 He will also urge others to make similar information publically available.
 
-One of our users has requested the creation of a branch for him and his
+One of our users has requested the creation of a private branch for his
 team to work on. Perhaps this will result in a valuable feature addition
 to the project.
 



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