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From drew <d...@baseanswers.com>
Subject Re: First Year Anniversary - party CD
Date Sat, 09 Jun 2012 07:24:57 GMT
On Fri, 2012-06-08 at 19:27 +0100, sebb wrote:
> On 8 June 2012 19:05, drew <drew@baseanswers.com> wrote:
> > On Thu, 2012-06-07 at 21:13 -0400, Rob Weir wrote:
> >> On Thu, Jun 7, 2012 at 6:43 PM, drew <drew@baseanswers.com> wrote:
> >> > On Thu, 2012-06-07 at 14:35 -0700, Nancy K wrote:
> >> >> I do like all of these, but have to show you folks what my friend Reya
Mellicker is offering - and she is willing to let Apache Open Office use it as you see fit.
 If you need an email consent or something, I can get that as well from her. What do you think?
> >> >> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/27834929/CloudsReyaMellicker.jpg
> >> >>
> >> >
> >> > Hi Nancy
> >> >
> >> > Thanks - I'll see if there is something I can do with that.
> >> >
> >> > OK - I've updated all three pieces
> >> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-label-win.png
> >> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-sleeve-win.png
> >> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-folded-win.png
> >> >
> >> > will leave these as is for now - any ideas on better content, etc.
> >> > appreciated.
> >> >
> >>
> >> Missing 't' in Productivity in
> >> http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-label-win.png
> >>
> >> Also it looks like you have (C) for the MS Office, etc.  I assume you
> >> want to acknowledge their trademark, not copyright.
> >
> >
> > Alright, Productivity now has a 't' where it should be, on all three
> > pieces.
> >
> > The (c) is now a (r) for the MS trademarks.
> >
> > Made the copy changes, per Nancy's recommendations - reads better now,
> > thank you Nancy.
> 
> It's not 100% clear to me if the CD contains just the Software
> Development Kit for the suite, or if it contains the SDK in addition
> to the suite.
> 
> I suspect the latter, but perhaps consider adding "includes" before
> the SDK text.

Howdy Sebb,

Ok, well I tried to be more explicit when putting the first cut of the
hard case cover together

http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-dvd-case-win.png

will go back and update the others to match, if that looks with
everyone.

//drew



> 
> > Pushed png with those changes to the URLs listed above.
> >
> > The clock/calendar tells me I need to call these done - unless someone
> > sees a real issue with anything there.
> >
> > So - question - is this the point where I need to send an email to the
> > ASF trademark mail list?
> >
> > //drew
> >
> 



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