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From robw...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1335256 - /incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34.html
Date Mon, 07 May 2012 21:02:28 GMT
Author: robweir
Date: Mon May  7 21:02:27 2012
New Revision: 1335256

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1335256&view=rev
Log:
Apply Shane's tweaks

Modified:
    incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34.html

Modified: incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34.html?rev=1335256&r1=1335255&r2=1335256&view=diff
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--- incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34.html (original)
+++ incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34.html Mon May  7 21:02:27 2012
@@ -23,15 +23,15 @@
 href="download.openoffice.org">downloads now available for Windows, Linux and Macintosh
free of charge</a>.</strong>
 </p>
 <p>
-<strong>http://OpenOffice.org &mdash;8 May 2012&mdash;</strong> The Apache
OpenOffice Project today announced the 
-availability of Apache OpenOffice 3.4, the first release of OpenOffice under the governance
of the Apache Software 
+<strong>http://www.OpenOffice.org &mdash;8 May 2012&mdash;</strong> The
Apache OpenOffice Project today announced the 
+availability of Apache OpenOffice&trade; 3.4, the first release of OpenOffice under the
governance of the Apache Software 
 Foundation.
 </p>
 <p>
 Apache OpenOffice is the original open source office productivity suite, designed for professional
and consumer use.
 </p>
 <p>
-"With the donation of OpenOffice to the ASF, the foundation, and especially the podling project,
was given a daunting 
+"With the donation of OpenOffice to the ASF, the Foundation, and especially the podling project,
was given a daunting 
 task: re-energize a community and transform OpenOffice from a codebase of unknown Intellectual
Property heritage, to a 
 vetted and Apache Licensed software suite," said Jim Jagielski, ASF President and an Apache
OpenOffice project mentor. "The 
 release of Apache OpenOffice 3.4 shows just how successful the project has been: pulling
in developers from over 21 
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ usability and performance improvements, 
 contribution.
 </p>
 <p>
-The Project Management Committee invites people to join. There are many different area where
contribution is most 
+The Apache OpenOffice Project Management Committee invites people to join. There are many
different area where contribution is most 
 welcome. Check out the <a
 href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/get-involved.html">Get Involved</a>
page.
 </p>
@@ -142,8 +142,9 @@ Source innovations "The Apache Way", the
 Members and 3,500 Committers across six continents. For more information, visit http://www.apache.org/.
 </p>
 <p>
-"Apache", "Apache OpenOffice", and "OpenOffice.org" are trademarks of The Apache Software
Foundation. All other brands 
-and trademarks are the property of their respective owners.
+"Apache", "Apache OpenOffice", "OpenOffice", and "OpenOffice.org" are either trademarks or
registered trademarks of 
+	The Apache Software Foundation in the United States and in other countries. All other brands
and trademarks are the 
+	property of their respective owners.
 </p>
 <hr/>
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