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From robw...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1296544 - /incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html
Date Sat, 03 Mar 2012 01:13:49 GMT
Author: robweir
Date: Sat Mar  3 01:13:49 2012
New Revision: 1296544

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1296544&view=rev
Log:
Edited news stories to be more similar in tone to the rest of the front page, e.g., let formal,
 refering to "our" project, etc.

Modified:
    incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html

Modified: incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html?rev=1296544&r1=1296543&r2=1296544&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html (original)
+++ incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html Sat Mar  3 01:13:49 2012
@@ -117,15 +117,15 @@
 <div id="news">
   <div class="campaign">
   <h2>www.openoffice.org is now hosted by the Apache Software Foundation</h2>
-  <p>The website has migrated to infrastructure hosted by the Apache Software Foundation.
Join the 
+  <p>Our website has migrated to infrastructure hosted by the Apache Software Foundation.
Join the 
     <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/mailing-lists.html#users_mailing_list">Users
Mailing List</a> or
     <a href="http://user.services.openoffice.org/">User Forums</a> if you have
questions or comments</p>
   </div>
   
   <div class="campaign">
-  <h2>Keep up with Apache OpenOffice (incubating)</h2>
-  <p>Keep up with latest developments in OpenOffice.org and the Apache OpenOffice project
at the
-  <a href="https://blogs.apache.org/OOo/">Apache OpenOffice.org (Incubating) blog</a>
or by subscribing to the
+  <h2>Keep up with Apache OpenOffice</h2>
+  <p>Keep up with latest developments in OpenOffice.org and the Apache OpenOffice project
at our new
+  <a href="https://blogs.apache.org/OOo/">Apache OpenOffice.org blog</a> or by
subscribing to our
     <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/mailing-lists.html#announce_mailing_list">Announce
Mailing List</a>.</p>
   </div>
   
@@ -133,8 +133,8 @@
   <h2>OpenOffice.org Joins Apache Incubator</h2>
   <p>On June 1, 2011, Oracle announced that it was donating OpenOffice.org's code to

   <a href="http://www.marketwire.com/press-release/statements-on-openofficeorg-contribution-to-apache-nasdaq-orcl-1521400.htm">The
Apache Software Foundation's Incubator.</a> 
-  The Apache OpenOffice (Incubating) <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/">http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg</a>
site was been established on June 13, 2011.
-    Please join us in this new, sustained phase of OpenOffice.org's life by subscribing to
the <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/projects/openofficeorg.html">mailing lists</a>.
<!--The <i>dev</i> 
+  The Apache OpenOffice "podling" <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/">http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg</a>
site was established on June 13, 2011.
+    Please join us in this new phase of OpenOffice.org by subscribing to our <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/projects/openofficeorg.html">mailing
lists</a>. <!--The <i>dev</i> 
   mailing list is currently a catch all list for planning OpenOffice.org's existence in the
ASF environment. We welcome your continued involvement!<br />
   OpenOffice.org downloads and support will continue to be available from this OpenOffice.org
site during the transition phase. --></p>
   </div>



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