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From sebb <seb...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: [DISCUSS] [VOTE] Graduate Apache Any23 from the Apache Incubator
Date Fri, 17 Aug 2012 11:40:20 GMT
On 17 August 2012 11:53, Andy Seaborne <andy@apache.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>      WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best
>>>>>>>      interests of the Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's
>>>>>>>      purpose to establish a Project Management Committee charged
with
>>>>>>>      the creation and maintenance of open-source software, for
>>>>>>>      distribution at no charge to the public, related to the
>>>>>>> automatic crawling,
>>>>>>>      parsing and analyzing of data to produce RDF.
>
>
> Chris wrote:
>>>
>>> How about:
>>>
>>> related to automatic crawling, parsing, analyzing, producing, and
>>> converting RDF
>>> data?
>
>
> Minor:
>
> [[
> related to automatic crawling, parsing, analyzing, producing, and converting
> *of* RDF data
> ]]

Suffers from the same problem that I mentioned before:

There's only one object - RDF data - for all the verbs.
However crawling, parsing and analysing don't apply to RDF data (at
least not exclusively).

The phrase needs to mention the other data that is involved.

>>>
>
>>> Sound better?
>
> sebb wrote:
>>
>>
>> At first glance, with the previous version in mind, it seems better.
>> But when re-read in isolation the phrase implies to me that only RDF
>> data is involved.
>>
>> ==
>>
>> Not sure how well known RDF is as a TLA.
>> For avoidance of doubt, perhaps put:
>>
>> RDF (Resource Description Framework) data
>>
>> where necessary.
>
>
> +1 to "RDF (Resource Description Framework)"
>
>         Andy
>
>
>
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