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From "Robert Burrell Donkin" <robertburrelldon...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: [VOTE] Graduate Tuscany as a top level project
Date Sat, 13 Oct 2007 10:17:29 GMT
On 10/13/07, Robert Burrell Donkin <robertburrelldonkin@gmail.com> wrote:
> On 10/13/07, ant elder <ant.elder@gmail.com> wrote:
> > On 10/13/07, Robert Burrell Donkin <robertburrelldonkin@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> <snip>
>
> > So bringing together all the comments so far gives something like:
> >
> > ...establish a Project Management Committee charged with the
> > creation and maintenance of open-source software that simplifies
> > the development, deployment and management of distributed
> > applications composed of independently acting, loosely coupled,
> > linguistically hetrogenous components connected using any of a
> > wide range of communication technologies. This software will implement
> > relevant open standards including, but not limited to, standards defined
> > by the OASIS OpenCSA group, for distribution at no charge to the public.
>
> the concatination makes last sentence is a little ambiguous. might be
> better to either start another sentence

it's wonderfully ironic that my grammar critique is not a sentence (or
at least, not in english)

- robert

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