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From "Niall Pemberton" <niall.pember...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: [docs] Please review first draft of graduation guide
Date Sat, 12 May 2007 17:28:52 GMT
On 5/12/07, robert burrell donkin <robertburrelldonkin@gmail.com> wrote:
> On 5/10/07, Niall Pemberton <niall.pemberton@gmail.com> wrote:
> > On 5/9/07, robert burrell donkin <robertburrelldonkin@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > http://incubator.apache.org/guides/graduation.html now has a
> > > reasonable quantity of content. the organisation could probably be
> > > improved, some necessary content has probably been missed and more
> > > proof reading would be good. so, this is a good time to post the draft
> > > for review.
> > >
> > > if you can find time, please take a look and post feedback to this
> > > thread, open a JIRA or just patch the document.
> >
> > I fixed a couple of links/anchors:
> >
> >    http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&revision=536731
>
> thanks
>
> > The only comment I have for the "On Community" part of the Notes
> > section is emphasising more that community at the ASF exists on
> > mailing lists. Probably something we take for granted - but may not be
> > obvious for newcomers. F2F conversations, IRC, private mail may all be
> > well and good, but they are non-existent as far as ASF community goes,
> > unless things are taken back to the list. IMO it would be good to
> > start this section emphasising this and the fact that the mailing list
> > archive is the tangible evidence on the health of a community.
>
> i've rewritten and expanded that section for the second draft
>
> take a look and see what you think

Looks really good to me - the only comment I would make is the use of
the word "serendipity" which isn't a particularly common and may be
confusing, esp. for non-native English speakers.

Niall

> - robert

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