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From: "Robert Burrell Donkin (JIRA)" <jira@apache.org>
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Subject: [jira] Closed: (INCUBATOR-42) [policy neutral] consistent use of
 term
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     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/INCUBATOR-42?page=all ]

Robert Burrell Donkin closed INCUBATOR-42.
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    Resolution: Fixed

Committed.

VOTE http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/200609.mbox/%3cf470f68e0609071027k2a9c76caxbde2dc042ff27491@mail.gmail.com%3e

> [policy neutral] consistent use of term
> ---------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: INCUBATOR-42
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/INCUBATOR-42
>             Project: Incubator
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: policy
>            Reporter: Robert Burrell Donkin
>         Assigned To: Robert Burrell Donkin
>
> The patch tightens the prose and uses language more consistently with the rest of the revisions.
> Index: site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml        (revision 437587)
> +++ site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml        (working copy)
> @@ -273,13 +273,15 @@
>  </p>
>        <section id="Setting+Up+a+New+Podling">
>          <title>Setting Up a New Podling</title>
> -        <p>Once the Podling and Mentor have been accepted by the Incubator PMC,
> -the following activities SHOULD take place :
> +        <p>
> +Once a proposal has been <a href='#Acceptance+By+Incubator'>accepted</a>
> +and the podling <a href='#Creation+of+Podling'>created</a> 
> +a <a href='#Mentor'>Mentor</a> SHOULD initiate the creation of:
>  </p>
>          <ul>
> -          <li>creation of "project status" page (see below);</li>
> -          <li>creation of mailing lists;</li>
> -          <li>creation of SVN-space;</li>
> +          <li>the <a href='#Ongoing+Activities'>project status</a> page;</li>
> +          <li>the mailing lists;</li>
> +          <li>the repository space;</li>
>          </ul>
>          <ul>
>            <li>Incubator PMC mandating a helper Mentor</li>
> Index: site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html
> ===================================================================
> --- site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html      (revision 437587)
> +++ site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html      (working copy)
> @@ -364,13 +364,15 @@
>     <a name="Setting+Up+a+New+Podling">Setting Up a New Podling</a>
>  </h3>
>  <div class="section-content">
> -<p>Once the Podling and Mentor have been accepted by the Incubator PMC,
> -the following activities SHOULD take place :
> +<p>
> +Once a proposal has been <a href="#Acceptance+By+Incubator">accepted</a>
> +and the podling <a href="#Creation+of+Podling">created</a> 
> +a <a href="#Mentor">Mentor</a> SHOULD initiate the creation of:
>  </p>
>  <ul>
> -          <li>creation of "project status" page (see below);</li>
> -          <li>creation of mailing lists;</li>
> -          <li>creation of SVN-space;</li>
> +          <li>the <a href="#Ongoing+Activities">project status</a> page;</li>
> +          <li>the mailing lists;</li>
> +          <li>the repository space;</li>
>          </ul>
>  <ul>
>            <li>Incubator PMC mandating a helper Mentor</li>

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