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From: "Robert Burrell Donkin (JIRA)" <jira@apache.org>
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Subject: [jira] Created: (INCUBATOR-42) [policy neutral] consistent use of
 term
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[policy neutral] consistent use of term
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                 Key: INCUBATOR-42
                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/INCUBATOR-42
             Project: Incubator
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: policy
            Reporter: Robert Burrell Donkin
         Assigned To: Robert Burrell Donkin


The patch tightens the prose and uses language more consistently with the rest of the revisions.

Index: site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml
===================================================================
--- site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml        (revision 437587)
+++ site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml        (working copy)
@@ -273,13 +273,15 @@
 </p>
       <section id="Setting+Up+a+New+Podling">
         <title>Setting Up a New Podling</title>
-        <p>Once the Podling and Mentor have been accepted by the Incubator PMC,
-the following activities SHOULD take place :
+        <p>
+Once a proposal has been <a href='#Acceptance+By+Incubator'>accepted</a>
+and the podling <a href='#Creation+of+Podling'>created</a> 
+a <a href='#Mentor'>Mentor</a> SHOULD initiate the creation of:
 </p>
         <ul>
-          <li>creation of "project status" page (see below);</li>
-          <li>creation of mailing lists;</li>
-          <li>creation of SVN-space;</li>
+          <li>the <a href='#Ongoing+Activities'>project status</a> page;</li>
+          <li>the mailing lists;</li>
+          <li>the repository space;</li>
         </ul>
         <ul>
           <li>Incubator PMC mandating a helper Mentor</li>
Index: site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html
===================================================================
--- site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html      (revision 437587)
+++ site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html      (working copy)
@@ -364,13 +364,15 @@
    <a name="Setting+Up+a+New+Podling">Setting Up a New Podling</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
-<p>Once the Podling and Mentor have been accepted by the Incubator PMC,
-the following activities SHOULD take place :
+<p>
+Once a proposal has been <a href="#Acceptance+By+Incubator">accepted</a>
+and the podling <a href="#Creation+of+Podling">created</a> 
+a <a href="#Mentor">Mentor</a> SHOULD initiate the creation of:
 </p>
 <ul>
-          <li>creation of "project status" page (see below);</li>
-          <li>creation of mailing lists;</li>
-          <li>creation of SVN-space;</li>
+          <li>the <a href="#Ongoing+Activities">project status</a> page;</li>
+          <li>the mailing lists;</li>
+          <li>the repository space;</li>
         </ul>
 <ul>
           <li>Incubator PMC mandating a helper Mentor</li>


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