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From Nicholas Kwiatkowski <nicho...@spoon.as>
Subject Re: Minor errata on the Apache Flex (incubating) page.
Date Wed, 05 Sep 2012 20:18:07 GMT
Thanks for pointing them out!  These corrections should be live now.

-Nick

On Wed, Sep 5, 2012 at 11:11 AM, Bruce Montague <Bruce_Montague@symantec.com
> wrote:

> Hi, I'm posting a very minor errata note here about the "Apache Flex
> (incubating)" page (apologies if this is the wrong list). Although minor,
> it's very visible in the small intro paragraph. The last sentence in the
> first paragraph should end with an "s":
>
> http://incubator.apache.org/flex/
>
> That is:
>
> "Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® Player
> in the browser, Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile or to native
> Android(tm), IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows® or Mac® application."
>
> Perhaps adding a "the" or "platform" or "device" in the 2nd phrase and
> using semicolons so as not to conflict with the last phrase that has commas
> (and using US list convention) might help:
>
> --> "Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash®
> Player in the browser; Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile platforms; or
> as native Android(tm), IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows®, or Mac® applications."
>
>
>
> Along the same lines (even more minor):
> "This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested
> the time or effort into the 4.x model."
>
> è  "This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested
> time or effort into the 4.x model."
>
>
>
> I normally wouldn't bother, but since the page is sort of the visible
> acting project home page...
>
>
>
> -bruce
>
>
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