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From Bruce Montague <Bruce_Monta...@symantec.com>
Subject Minor errata on the Apache Flex (incubating) page.
Date Wed, 05 Sep 2012 15:11:51 GMT
Hi, I'm posting a very minor errata note here about the "Apache Flex (incubating)" page (apologies
if this is the wrong list). Although minor, it's very visible in the small intro paragraph.
The last sentence in the first paragraph should end with an "s":

http://incubator.apache.org/flex/

That is:

"Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® Player in the browser,
Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile or to native Android(tm), IOS(tm), QNX®, Windows®
or Mac® application."

Perhaps adding a "the" or "platform" or "device" in the 2nd phrase and using semicolons so
as not to conflict with the last phrase that has commas (and using US list convention) might
help:

--> "Flex applications can be deployed to the ubiquitous Adobe® Flash® Player in the
browser; Adobe® AIR(tm) on desktop and mobile platforms; or as native Android(tm), IOS(tm),
QNX®, Windows®, or Mac® applications."



Along the same lines (even more minor):
"This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested the time or effort
into the 4.x model."

è  "This will make many enterprises happy since quite a few never invested time or effort
into the 4.x model."



I normally wouldn't bother, but since the page is sort of the visible acting project home
page...



-bruce





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