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From mar...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1550330 - /incubator/public/trunk/content/guides/release.xml
Date Thu, 12 Dec 2013 01:46:58 GMT
Author: marvin
Date: Thu Dec 12 01:46:58 2013
New Revision: 1550330

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1550330
Log:
Use Bertrand's active phrasings.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/content/guides/release.xml

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/content/guides/release.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/content/guides/release.xml?rev=1550330&r1=1550329&r2=1550330&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/content/guides/release.xml [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/content/guides/release.xml [utf-8] Thu Dec 12 01:46:58 2013
@@ -42,21 +42,21 @@ href="http://incubator.apache.org/incuba
     <section id="manifest-usage"><title>Release Procedure</title>
       <p>
 Once a release candidate is ready, the <a
-href="http://www.apache.org/dev/release-publishing.html#release_manager">Release Manager</a>
should create a <a
+href="http://www.apache.org/dev/release-publishing.html#release_manager">Release Manager</a>
creates a <a
 href="http://incubator.apache.org/guides/release.html#release-manifest-template">Release
-Manifest</a> as a plain text file at http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator/public/trunk/votes/$PODLING
and fill in all initial fields.
+Manifest</a> as a plain text file at http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator/public/trunk/votes/$PODLING
and fills in all initial fields.
       </p>
       <p>
-A [VOTE] thread should be started on the podling's dev list in accordance with <a
+A [VOTE] thread is started on the podling's dev list in accordance with <a
 href="http://incubator.apache.org/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Releases">Incubator
policy on releases</a>.  The
-email kicking off the [VOTE] should contain a link URL for the Manifest.  While the [VOTE]
is in progress, reviewers
-update the Manifest accordingly.  Should the dev list [VOTE] pass, a [VOTE] on general@incubator
should be called, again
+email kicking off the [VOTE] contains a link URL for the Manifest.  While the [VOTE] is in
progress, reviewers
+update the Manifest accordingly.  If the dev list [VOTE] passes, a [VOTE] on general@incubator
is called, again
 in accordance with Incubator release <a
 href="http://incubator.apache.org/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Releases">policy</a>
and again referencing the
 Manifest URL.
       </p>
       <p>
-Once the voting process concludes -- regardless of success or failure -- the Release Manager
should archive the Manifest
+Once the voting process concludes -- regardless of success or failure -- the Release Manager
archives the Manifest
 permanently by moving it from votes/$PODLING/ to votes/$PODLING/archive/.
       </p>
     </section>



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