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From bdelacre...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1451052 - /incubator/public/trunk/content/podling-story.xml
Date Thu, 28 Feb 2013 00:17:20 GMT
Author: bdelacretaz
Date: Thu Feb 28 00:17:20 2013
New Revision: 1451052

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1451052
Log:
flesh out intro

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/content/podling-story.xml

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/content/podling-story.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/content/podling-story.xml?rev=1451052&r1=1451051&r2=1451052&view=diff
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--- incubator/public/trunk/content/podling-story.xml [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/content/podling-story.xml [utf-8] Thu Feb 28 00:17:20 2013
@@ -27,11 +27,22 @@ limitations under the License.
     <section id="story">
       <title>DRAFT - The Story of a Podling</title>
       <p><b>This is just a draft for now...still a work in progress</b></p>
-      <p>Intended audience: incubator beginners</p>
-      <p>Not policy, only informative</p>
-      <p>Based on the incubation stories of Flex and Clerezza</p>
-      <p>Links are what we consider good examples</p>
-      <p>Keep this short - 10 minutes read?</p>
+      <p>
+        This is an informational overview of the life of a podling, from proposal to graduation.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        It is intended for people considering incubating their project at the ASF, or people
joining podlings,
+        to give them an overview of the incubation process.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        Links to examples of proposals, discussions etc. are provided
+        to give a more concrete overview of what happens during incubation. 
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        We won't include many details - the goal is to keep this short, 
+        so that you consume it in about ten minutes.
+      </p>
+      
         <section id="foo">
           <title>Proposal</title>
           <p>champion</p>



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