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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1237081 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/names.xml site-publish/guides/names.html
Date Sat, 28 Jan 2012 16:09:34 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sat Jan 28 16:09:34 2012
New Revision: 1237081

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1237081&view=rev
Log:
Tidied up and improved consistency

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml?rev=1237081&r1=1237080&r2=1237081&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] Sat Jan 28 16:09:34 2012
@@ -112,11 +112,8 @@ framework provided by the Brand team.
   These qualities also happen to be useful when it comes to securing trademark protection.
   Have fun. Be creative.
   </p>
-  <!-- TODO: Harvest stories behind names -->
-  <!-- TODO: Inspiration -->
   </section>
   <section><title>Podling Suitable Name Search</title>
-    <!-- TODO: rewrite using simpler phrasing -->
   <p>
 The initial <a href='http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html'>proposal</a>

 establishes a working name for the new podling.
@@ -151,8 +148,7 @@ Therefore complete this task as soon as 
   </section>
 
   <section id='search'>
-  <title>Conducting The Suitable Name Search</title>
-  <!-- TODO Improve leading commentary -->
+  <title>Conducting A Suitable Name Search</title>
   <p>The aim - to find a name that is acceptable to the community and is not unsuitable.</p>
   <p>
 A suitable name search has public and private elements. 

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html?rev=1237081&r1=1237080&r2=1237081&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] Sat Jan 28 16:09:34 2012
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ Therefore complete this task as soon as 
 </p>
 </div>
 </div>
-        <h2 id='search'><img src="../images/redarrow.gif" />Conducting The Suitable
Name Search</h2>
+        <h2 id='search'><img src="../images/redarrow.gif" />Conducting A Suitable
Name Search</h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>The aim - to find a name that is acceptable to the community and is not unsuitable.</p>
 <p>



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