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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1236870 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/names.xml site-publish/guides/names.html
Date Fri, 27 Jan 2012 20:21:26 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Fri Jan 27 20:21:26 2012
New Revision: 1236870

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1236870&view=rev
Log:
Fixed typos

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml?rev=1236870&r1=1236869&r2=1236870&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] Fri Jan 27 20:21:26 2012
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Names <a href='http://www.apache.org/fou
   	<ul>
   	<li>the <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/' rel='tag'>Apache
Trademark Policy</a> <br/>(which introduces trademarks and outlines our policy);</li>
   	<li>the <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/' rel='tag'>Apache
Trademark FAQs</a> <br/>(which answers questions asked by downstream consumers);
and</li>
-  	<li>the<a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html'>Apache Project
Branding Requirements</a> <br/>(which guides PMCs).</li>
+  	<li>the <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html'>Apache
Project Branding Requirements</a> <br/>(which guides PMCs).</li>
   	</ul>
   	  	<p>For podlings in the Incubator, naming issues are managed co-operatively by
the Brand and Incubator communities.
 Rules for podlings include all branding requirements for PMCs, plus a few extras. 
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ framework provided by the Brand team.
   <p>Good names for commercial products or <code>UNIX</code> utilities
have tended to work less well here at Apache.
   Many successful Apache project names are memorable, unusual and a little 
   <a href='http://www.sdtimes.com/TOP_FIVE_HEAD_SCRATCHINGEST_NAMES_FOR_APACHE_PROJECTS/By_Victoria_Reitano/About_APACHE_and_HADOOP_and_HARMONY_and_MYSQL_and_OODT_and_YAY/35959'>whimsical</a>.
-  These qualities are also happen to be useful when it comes to securing trademark protection.
+  These qualities also happen to be useful when it comes to securing trademark protection.
   Have fun. Be creative.
   </p>
   <!-- TODO: Harvest stories behind names -->
@@ -194,7 +194,8 @@ Whether a name is suitable or unsuitable
          <p>
 Facts and activities performed are <a href='https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/PODLINGNAMESEARCH'>recorded</a>
for the public.
 Interpretation and analysis of these facts happens on private mailing lists, the PPMC private
in the first instance. 
-Whether the name proved suitable or unsuitable is public but take care to use our language
(<em>ethically unsuitable</em> or 
+Whether the name proved suitable or unsuitable should be entered into the public record 
+but take care to use our language (<em>ethically unsuitable</em> or 
 <em>not unique enough</em>) and to avoid loaded legal terms.
          </p>
          
@@ -296,9 +297,9 @@ this does not necessary eliminate the pr
 Leave analysis and interpretation to private lists. 
 When a search returns a large number of hits, focus on live registrations related to software.
 </p><p> 
-The foremost is <abbr title='Trademark Electronic Search System'>TESS</abbr>
run by
+The foremost online resource is <abbr title='Trademark Electronic Search System'>TESS</abbr>
run by
 <abbr title='United States Patent and Trademark Office'>USPTO</abbr>. Before
using
-TESS, please browse documentation links from  
+TESS, please browse the documentation links from 
 <a href='http://www.uspto.gov/trademarks/index.jsp'>USPTO trademark home</a>.
             </p>
             <p>
@@ -311,7 +312,7 @@ for the state of this art.
             <p>
 Registration of trademark is not required. Rights may also be obtained by use of a mark in
commerce.
     </p><p>
-Use a variety web search engines (for example, <a href='http:/www.bing.com'>bing</a>,
<a href='http://www.google.com'>google</a>
+Use a variety of web search engines (for example, <a href='http:/www.bing.com'>bing</a>,
<a href='http://www.google.com'>google</a>
 and <a href='http://search.yahoo.com'>yahoo</a>) to survey usage on the world
wide web. 
 </p><ul>
 <li>The

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html?rev=1236870&r1=1236869&r2=1236870&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] Fri Jan 27 20:21:26 2012
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ Names <a href="http://www.apache.org/fou
 <ul>
   	<li>the <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/" rel="tag">Apache
Trademark Policy</a> <br />(which introduces trademarks and outlines our policy);</li>
   	<li>the <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/" rel="tag">Apache
Trademark FAQs</a> <br />(which answers questions asked by downstream consumers);
and</li>
-  	<li>the<a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html">Apache Project
Branding Requirements</a> <br />(which guides PMCs).</li>
+  	<li>the <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html">Apache
Project Branding Requirements</a> <br />(which guides PMCs).</li>
   	</ul>
 <p>For podlings in the Incubator, naming issues are managed co-operatively by the Brand
and Incubator communities.
 Rules for podlings include all branding requirements for PMCs, plus a few extras. 
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ framework provided by the Brand team.
 <p>Good names for commercial products or <code>UNIX</code> utilities have
tended to work less well here at Apache.
   Many successful Apache project names are memorable, unusual and a little 
   <a href="http://www.sdtimes.com/TOP_FIVE_HEAD_SCRATCHINGEST_NAMES_FOR_APACHE_PROJECTS/By_Victoria_Reitano/About_APACHE_and_HADOOP_and_HARMONY_and_MYSQL_and_OODT_and_YAY/35959">whimsical</a>.
-  These qualities are also happen to be useful when it comes to securing trademark protection.
+  These qualities also happen to be useful when it comes to securing trademark protection.
   Have fun. Be creative.
   </p>
 </div>
@@ -294,7 +294,8 @@ Whether a name is suitable or unsuitable
 <p>
 Facts and activities performed are <a href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/PODLINGNAMESEARCH">recorded</a>
for the public.
 Interpretation and analysis of these facts happens on private mailing lists, the PPMC private
in the first instance. 
-Whether the name proved suitable or unsuitable is public but take care to use our language
(<em>ethically unsuitable</em> or 
+Whether the name proved suitable or unsuitable should be entered into the public record 
+but take care to use our language (<em>ethically unsuitable</em> or 
 <em>not unique enough</em>) and to avoid loaded legal terms.
          </p>
 <h4 id='main-sequence'>The Main Sequence</h4>
@@ -400,9 +401,9 @@ Leave analysis and interpretation to pri
 When a search returns a large number of hits, focus on live registrations related to software.
 </p>
 <p> 
-The foremost is <abbr title="Trademark Electronic Search System">TESS</abbr>
run by
+The foremost online resource is <abbr title="Trademark Electronic Search System">TESS</abbr>
run by
 <abbr title="United States Patent and Trademark Office">USPTO</abbr>. Before
using
-TESS, please browse documentation links from  
+TESS, please browse the documentation links from 
 <a href="http://www.uspto.gov/trademarks/index.jsp">USPTO trademark home</a>.
             </p>
 <p>
@@ -417,7 +418,7 @@ for the state of this art.
 Registration of trademark is not required. Rights may also be obtained by use of a mark in
commerce.
     </p>
 <p>
-Use a variety web search engines (for example, <a href="http:/www.bing.com">bing</a>,
<a href="http://www.google.com">google</a>
+Use a variety of web search engines (for example, <a href="http:/www.bing.com">bing</a>,
<a href="http://www.google.com">google</a>
 and <a href="http://search.yahoo.com">yahoo</a>) to survey usage on the world
wide web. 
 </p>
 <ul>



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