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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1232807 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/names.xml site-publish/guides/names.html
Date Wed, 18 Jan 2012 09:30:35 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Wed Jan 18 09:30:35 2012
New Revision: 1232807

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1232807&view=rev
Log:
Improved phrasing and simplified langauge.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml?rev=1232807&r1=1232806&r2=1232807&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] Wed Jan 18 09:30:35 2012
@@ -26,10 +26,12 @@ limitations under the License.
   <strong>do not</strong> use it as a substitute. 
   Its aims are education and information <strong>only</strong>. 
   </p><p>
-  A process is described that may help a community to filter out  
-  unsuitable names early, reducing the legal resources required later and
+  This process filters out unsuitable names early, 
+  reducing the legal resources required and
   limiting the potential disruption to a community of a forced name change 
-  later.
+  later. A smooth path, but not the only one. If there are reasons
+  why this road isn't right for your podling, 
+  consult <a href='http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/'>incubator
general</a>.
   </p>
     <section>
   	<title>The Basics</title>
@@ -40,9 +42,9 @@ Names <a href='http://www.apache.org/fou
 <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/'>V.P., Brand Management</a> (and 
 <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/#whoweare'>team</a>). Please
start by reading:</p>
   	<ul>
-  	<li><a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/' rel='tag'>Apache Trademark
Policy</a> <br/>(which introduces trademarks and outlines our policy);</li>
-  	<li><a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/' rel='tag'>Apache
Trademark FAQs</a> <br/>(which answers questions asked by downstream consumers);
and</li>
-  	<li><a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html'>Apache Project
Branding Requirements</a> <br/>(which guides PMCs).</li>
+  	<li>the <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/' rel='tag'>Apache
Trademark Policy</a> <br/>(which introduces trademarks and outlines our policy);</li>
+  	<li>the <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/' rel='tag'>Apache
Trademark FAQs</a> <br/>(which answers questions asked by downstream consumers);
and</li>
+  	<li>the<a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html'>Apache Project
Branding Requirements</a> <br/>(which guides PMCs).</li>
   	</ul>
   	  	<p>For podlings in the Incubator, naming issues are managed co-operatively by
the Brand and Incubator communities.
 Rules for podlings include all branding requirements for PMCs, plus a few extras. 

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html?rev=1232807&r1=1232806&r2=1232807&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] Wed Jan 18 09:30:35 2012
@@ -130,10 +130,12 @@ href="http://wiki.apache.org/incubator">
   Its aims are education and information <strong>only</strong>. 
   </p>
 <p>
-  A process is described that may help a community to filter out  
-  unsuitable names early, reducing the legal resources required later and
+  This process filters out unsuitable names early, 
+  reducing the legal resources required and
   limiting the potential disruption to a community of a forced name change 
-  later.
+  later. A smooth path, but not the only one. If there are reasons
+  why this road isn't right for your podling, 
+  consult <a href="http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/">incubator
general</a>.
   </p>
 <h3>The Basics</h3>
 <div class="section-content">
@@ -144,9 +146,9 @@ Names <a href="http://www.apache.org/fou
 <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/">V.P., Brand Management</a> (and 
 <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/#whoweare">team</a>). Please
start by reading:</p>
 <ul>
-  	<li><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/" rel="tag">Apache Trademark
Policy</a> <br />(which introduces trademarks and outlines our policy);</li>
-  	<li><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/" rel="tag">Apache
Trademark FAQs</a> <br />(which answers questions asked by downstream consumers);
and</li>
-  	<li><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html">Apache Project
Branding Requirements</a> <br />(which guides PMCs).</li>
+  	<li>the <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/" rel="tag">Apache
Trademark Policy</a> <br />(which introduces trademarks and outlines our policy);</li>
+  	<li>the <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/" rel="tag">Apache
Trademark FAQs</a> <br />(which answers questions asked by downstream consumers);
and</li>
+  	<li>the<a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs.html">Apache Project
Branding Requirements</a> <br />(which guides PMCs).</li>
   	</ul>
 <p>For podlings in the Incubator, naming issues are managed co-operatively by the Brand
and Incubator communities.
 Rules for podlings include all branding requirements for PMCs, plus a few extras. 



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