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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1231753 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/names.xml site-publish/guides/names.html
Date Sun, 15 Jan 2012 21:06:38 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Jan 15 21:06:38 2012
New Revision: 1231753

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1231753&view=rev
Log:
Improved phrasing

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml?rev=1231753&r1=1231752&r2=1231753&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/names.xml [utf-8] Sun Jan 15 21:06:38 2012
@@ -106,10 +106,10 @@ framework provided by the Brand team.
   
   <section id='naming-hints'>
   <title>What Makes A Name Good</title>
-  <p>Good names for commercial products or <code>UNIX</code> utilities
are often not great names for open source products here at Apache.
-  Many successful open source product names are a memorable, unusual and a little 
+  <p>Good names for commercial products or <code>UNIX</code> utilities
may work less well for Apache products.
+  Many of our successful open source product names are memorable, unusual and a little 
   <a href='http://www.sdtimes.com/TOP_FIVE_HEAD_SCRATCHINGEST_NAMES_FOR_APACHE_PROJECTS/By_Victoria_Reitano/About_APACHE_and_HADOOP_and_HARMONY_and_MYSQL_and_OODT_and_YAY/35959'>whimsical</a>.
-  
+  These qualities are also often good when it comes to securing trademark protection.
   </p>
   <!-- TODO: Harvest stories behind names -->
   <!-- TODO: Inspiration -->

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html?rev=1231753&r1=1231752&r2=1231753&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/names.html [utf-8] Sun Jan 15 21:06:38 2012
@@ -210,10 +210,10 @@ framework provided by the Brand team.
 </div>
 <h3 id='naming-hints'>What Makes A Name Good</h3>
 <div class="section-content">
-<p>Good names for commercial products or <code>UNIX</code> utilities are
often not great names for open source products here at Apache.
-  Many successful open source product names are a memorable, unusual and a little 
+<p>Good names for commercial products or <code>UNIX</code> utilities may
work less well for Apache products.
+  Many of our successful open source product names are memorable, unusual and a little 
   <a href="http://www.sdtimes.com/TOP_FIVE_HEAD_SCRATCHINGEST_NAMES_FOR_APACHE_PROJECTS/By_Victoria_Reitano/About_APACHE_and_HADOOP_and_HARMONY_and_MYSQL_and_OODT_and_YAY/35959">whimsical</a>.
-  
+  These qualities are also often good when it comes to securing trademark protection.
   </p>
 </div>
 <h3>Podling Suitable Name Search</h3>



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