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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r609386 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/website.xml site-publish/guides/website.html
Date Sun, 06 Jan 2008 19:42:19 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Jan  6 11:42:17 2008
New Revision: 609386

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=609386&view=rev
Log:
Improved phrasing.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/website.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/website.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/website.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/website.xml?rev=609386&r1=609385&r2=609386&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/website.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/website.xml Sun Jan  6 11:42:17 2008
@@ -89,11 +89,10 @@
            <li>
            Copy from the template
            <code>site-author/projects/incubation-status-template.xml</code> to
-           <code>site-author/projects/${project}.xml</code> then <code>'svn
add'</code>.
+           <code>site-author/projects/${project}.xml</code> then <code>'svn
add'</code>
            </li>
            <li>
-           The copied template contains instructions about how to customize
-           the template for use by a project. Follow them.
+           The copied template contains customization instructions. Follow them.
            </li>
            <li>
            Go through the template actions. Delete any which are not 
@@ -116,7 +115,7 @@
            </li>
            <li>
            Update the copy in the staging directory <code>/www/incubator.apache.org</code>.
-           It may a few hours before the live website is sync'd.
+           It may take a few hours before the live website is sync'd.
            </li>
         </ol>
         </section>

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/website.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/website.html?rev=609386&r1=609385&r2=609386&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/website.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/website.html Sun Jan  6 11:42:17 2008
@@ -172,11 +172,10 @@
            <li>
            Copy from the template
            <code>site-author/projects/incubation-status-template.xml</code> to
-           <code>site-author/projects/${project}.xml</code> then <code>'svn
add'</code>.
+           <code>site-author/projects/${project}.xml</code> then <code>'svn
add'</code>
            </li>
            <li>
-           The copied template contains instructions about how to customize
-           the template for use by a project. Follow them.
+           The copied template contains customization instructions. Follow them.
            </li>
            <li>
            Go through the template actions. Delete any which are not 
@@ -199,7 +198,7 @@
            </li>
            <li>
            Update the copy in the staging directory <code>/www/incubator.apache.org</code>.
-           It may a few hours before the live website is sync'd.
+           It may take a few hours before the live website is sync'd.
            </li>
         </ol>
 </div>



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