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Subject svn commit: r548016 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/graduation.xml site-publish/guides/graduation.html
Date Sun, 17 Jun 2007 07:53:15 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Jun 17 00:53:14 2007
New Revision: 548016

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=548016
Log:
Small changes in phrasing.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml?view=diff&rev=548016&r1=548015&r2=548016
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml Sun Jun 17 00:53:14 2007
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 			<title>What is Graduation?</title>
 			<p>
 
-				Graduation is the act of a Podling becoming either a
+				Graduation is the act of a podling becoming either a
 				subproject under an already existing Apache project, or
 				becoming a top level Apache project. Graduating is a
 				democratic process: in the end, it comes down to a <code><a 
@@ -93,13 +93,13 @@
 					Each proposal has a <a
 					href='incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Sponsor'>Sponsor</a>.
 					The identity of the Sponsor indicates the natural
-					destination: for proposals sponsored by the <a 
+					destination. For proposals sponsored by the <a 
                     href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#board'>Board</a>
or by
 					the <a
 					href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29'>Incubator
-					PMC (IPMC)</a>, this is a top level project; for others,
-					this is as a subproject of the sponsoring project but the
-					destination is fixed on graduation, not entry. Projects
+					PMC (IPMC)</a>, this is a top level project. For others,
+					this is as a subproject of the sponsoring project. However, the
+					destination is fixed only on graduation, not entry. Projects
 					grow and evolve during the graduation process. As
 					graduation approaches, this original preference should be
 					reviewed based on where the project is now.
@@ -138,9 +138,9 @@
 			<title>Before You Graduate</title>
 			<p>
 
-				Before you start graduation, you need to make sure you are
-				ready and meet the requirements imposed on Apache projects.
-				This section will provide a shortlist for Podlings to
+				Before you start thinking about graduation, you need to make 
+                sure you are ready and meet the requirements imposed on Apache projects.
+				This section will provide a shortlist for podlings to
 				determine if they meet the criteria for asking graduation.
 
 			</p>
@@ -430,16 +430,15 @@
 				</p>
 				<p>
 
-					The following steps are needed for graduating to a top
-					level project:
+					Graduation to a top level project requires:
 
 					<ul>
-						<li>positive community graduation <code><a 
+                        <li>a charter for your project</li>
+						<li>a positive community graduation <code><a 
                         href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html'>VOTE</a></code></li>
-						<li>writing a charter for your project</li>
-						<li>positive IPMC recommendation <code><a 
+						<li>a positive IPMC recommendation <code><a 
                         href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html'>VOTE</a></code></li>
-						<li>acceptance of <a href='#tlp-resolution'>resolution</a> by the
Board</li>
+						<li>the acceptance of the <a href='#tlp-resolution'>resolution</a>
by the Board</li>
 					</ul>
 
 					This process can take a while, since it typically sparks
@@ -687,7 +686,8 @@
 				<p>
 
 					Subprojects are accepted by a Project Management
-					Committee. The Incubator Project Management Committee
+					Committee. The <a
+                    href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29'>Incubator
Project Management Committee</a>
 					needs to approve the graduation of the podling to a
 					subproject.
 
@@ -717,8 +717,7 @@
 						href='lists.html#general+at+incubator.apache.org'>incubator
 						general list</a> and the <a
 						href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Sponsor'>sponsoring
-						top level project</a> when the <code><a 
-                        href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html'>VOTE</a></code>
+						top level project</a> when the <code>VOTE</code>
                         is proposed.
 
 					</p>

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html?view=diff&rev=548016&r1=548015&r2=548016
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html Sun Jun 17 00:53:14 2007
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
 
-				Graduation is the act of a Podling becoming either a
+				Graduation is the act of a podling becoming either a
 				subproject under an already existing Apache project, or
 				becoming a top level Apache project. Graduating is a
 				democratic process: in the end, it comes down to a <code><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html">VOTE</a></code>.
Note
@@ -332,11 +332,11 @@
 <p>
 					Each proposal has a <a href="incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Sponsor">Sponsor</a>.
 					The identity of the Sponsor indicates the natural
-					destination: for proposals sponsored by the <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#board">Board</a>
or by
+					destination. For proposals sponsored by the <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#board">Board</a>
or by
 					the <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29">Incubator
-					PMC (IPMC)</a>, this is a top level project; for others,
-					this is as a subproject of the sponsoring project but the
-					destination is fixed on graduation, not entry. Projects
+					PMC (IPMC)</a>, this is a top level project. For others,
+					this is as a subproject of the sponsoring project. However, the
+					destination is fixed only on graduation, not entry. Projects
 					grow and evolve during the graduation process. As
 					graduation approaches, this original preference should be
 					reviewed based on where the project is now.
@@ -372,9 +372,9 @@
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
 
-				Before you start graduation, you need to make sure you are
-				ready and meet the requirements imposed on Apache projects.
-				This section will provide a shortlist for Podlings to
+				Before you start thinking about graduation, you need to make 
+                sure you are ready and meet the requirements imposed on Apache projects.
+				This section will provide a shortlist for podlings to
 				determine if they meet the criteria for asking graduation.
 
 			</p>
@@ -653,14 +653,13 @@
 				</p>
 <p>
 
-					The following steps are needed for graduating to a top
-					level project:
+					Graduation to a top level project requires:
 
 					<ul>
-						<li>positive community graduation <code><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html">VOTE</a></code></li>
-						<li>writing a charter for your project</li>
-						<li>positive IPMC recommendation <code><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html">VOTE</a></code></li>
-						<li>acceptance of <a href="#tlp-resolution">resolution</a> by the
Board</li>
+                        <li>a charter for your project</li>
+						<li>a positive community graduation <code><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html">VOTE</a></code></li>
+						<li>a positive IPMC recommendation <code><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html">VOTE</a></code></li>
+						<li>the acceptance of the <a href="#tlp-resolution">resolution</a>
by the Board</li>
 					</ul>
 
 					This process can take a while, since it typically sparks
@@ -893,7 +892,7 @@
 <p>
 
 					Subprojects are accepted by a Project Management
-					Committee. The Incubator Project Management Committee
+					Committee. The <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29">Incubator
Project Management Committee</a>
 					needs to approve the graduation of the podling to a
 					subproject.
 
@@ -919,7 +918,7 @@
 						and community positively express their readiness for
 						graduation. It is wise to copy the <a href="lists.html#general+at+incubator.apache.org">incubator
 						general list</a> and the <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Sponsor">sponsoring
-						top level project</a> when the <code><a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/voting.html">VOTE</a></code>
+						top level project</a> when the <code>VOTE</code>
                         is proposed.
 
 					</p>



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