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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r547917 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/graduation.xml site-publish/guides/graduation.html
Date Sat, 16 Jun 2007 12:52:29 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sat Jun 16 05:52:28 2007
New Revision: 547917

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=547917
Log:
Revise titles

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml?view=diff&rev=547917&r1=547916&r2=547917
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/graduation.xml Sat Jun 16 05:52:28 2007
@@ -14,12 +14,12 @@
 -->
 <document>
 	<properties>
-		<title>Guide to successful graduation (DRAFT)</title>
+		<title>Guide to Successful Graduation (DRAFT)</title>
 		<atom url="http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/?format=atom">general@incubator.apache.org
Archives</atom>
 	</properties>
 	<body>
 		<section id="preamble">
-			<title>Guide to successful graduation (DRAFT)</title>
+			<title>Guide to Successful Graduation (DRAFT)</title>
 			<section id="status">
 				<title>Status - DRAFT</title>
 				<p>This document is under development.</p>
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 			</section>
 		</section>
 		<section id="introduction">
-			<title>What is graduation?</title>
+			<title>What is Graduation?</title>
 			<p>
 
 				Graduation is the act of a Podling becoming either a
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 
 			</p>
 			<section id='subproject-or-top-level'>
-				<title>To Graduate To Subproject Or To Top Level</title>
+				<title>Whether to Graduate to Subproject or to Top Level Project</title>
 				<p>
 					Each proposal has a <a
 					href='incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Sponsor'>Sponsor</a>.
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 			</section>
 		</section>
 		<section id="requirements">
-			<title>Before you graduate</title>
+			<title>Before You Graduate</title>
 			<p>
 
 				Before you start graduation, you need to make sure you are
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@
 			</section>
 
 			<section id='notes-status'>
-				<title>Checking the status file</title>
+				<title>Checking the Status File</title>
 				<p>
 
 					The status file records and summarizes incubation-related
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@
 			</section>
 
 			<section id='releases'>
-				<title>Creating an Apache release</title>
+				<title>Creating an Apache Release</title>
 				<blockquote cite='http://catb.org/esr/writings/cathedral-bazaar/cathedral-bazaar/ar01s04.html'>
 					<p>Release Early, Release Often</p>
 					<div align='right'>
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@
 			</section>
 
 			<section id="community">
-				<title>Having an open and diverse community</title>
+				<title>Creating an Open and Diverse community</title>
 				<p>
 
 					A major criterion for graduation is to have developed an
@@ -413,10 +413,10 @@
             </section>
 		</section>
 		<section id="process">
-			<title>The graduation process</title>
+			<title>The Graduation Process</title>
 
 			<section id="toplevel">
-				<title>Graduating to a top level project</title>
+				<title>Graduating to a Top Level Project</title>
 
 				<p>
 
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@
 				</section>
 
 				<section id='tlp-resolution'>
-					<title>Preparing A Charter</title>
+					<title>Preparing a Charter</title>
 					<p>
 
 						So, in this case a suitable <a 
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@
 					</p>
 				</section>
 				<section id='top-level-board-proposal'>
-					<title>Submission Of The Resolution To The Board</title>
+					<title>Submission of the Resolution to the Board</title>
 					<p>
 
 						Top level projects are created by a <a href='#tlp-resolution'>resolution</a>
by the
@@ -683,7 +683,7 @@
 				</section>
 			</section>
 			<section id="subproject">
-				<title>Graduating to a subproject</title>
+				<title>Graduating to a Subproject</title>
 				<p>
 
 					Subprojects are accepted by a Project Management
@@ -761,10 +761,10 @@
 			</section>
 		</section>
 		<section id="life-after-graduation">
-			<title>Life after graduation</title>
+			<title>Life After Graduation</title>
 
 			<section id='notes-on-hand-over'>
-				<title>On The Handover</title>
+				<title>Handover</title>
 				<p>
 
 					This is the transfer of virtual resources from the care of
@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@
 				</p>
 
 				<section id='existing-project-hand-over'>
-					<title>Graduating As Subproject</title>
+					<title>Graduating as Subproject</title>
 					<p>
 
 						This is the simple case. The <a
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@
 				</section>
 
 				<section id='new-project-hand-over'>
-					<title>Graduating As New Project</title>
+					<title>Graduating as New Top Level Project</title>
 					<p>
 
 						When graduating to a new project, the process is more
@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@
 				</section>
 			</section>
 			<section id='project-first-steps'>
-				<title>First Steps Outside The Incubator</title>
+				<title>First Steps Outside the Incubator</title>
 				<p>
 
 					Graduation is the first step in what is hopefully a long road.
@@ -1158,7 +1158,7 @@
 					</ol>
 				</section>
               <section id='unincubate'>
-            <title>Removing the Podling from Incubation</title>
+            <title>Final Revision of Podling Incubation Records</title>
             <p>
               When a project graduates, then the incubator resources
               need to be updated to indicate that the project is no

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html?view=diff&rev=547917&r1=547916&r2=547917
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/graduation.html Sat Jun 16 05:52:28 2007
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1" />
   <link rel="stylesheet" href="/style/style.css" type="text/css" />
     <link rel="alternate" title="general@incubator.apache.org Archives" type="application/atom+xml"
href="http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/?format=atom" />
-    <title>Guide to successful graduation (DRAFT) - Apache Incubator</title>
+    <title>Guide to Successful Graduation (DRAFT) - Apache Incubator</title>
  </head>
  <body>        
   <table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0">
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
     <!-- CONTENT -->
     <td align="left" valign="top" class="content">
                 <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   <a name="preamble">Guide to successful graduation (DRAFT)</a>
+   <a name="preamble">Guide to Successful Graduation (DRAFT)</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <h3>
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
 <div class="section-content">
 <ul>
 <li><a href='#preamble'>
-Guide to successful graduation (DRAFT)
+Guide to Successful Graduation (DRAFT)
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#status'>
@@ -137,17 +137,17 @@
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#introduction'>
-What is graduation?
+What is Graduation?
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#subproject-or-top-level'>
-To Graduate To Subproject Or To Top Level
+Whether to Graduate to Subproject or to Top Level Project
  </a>
 </li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#requirements'>
-Before you graduate
+Before You Graduate
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#checklist'>
@@ -155,15 +155,15 @@
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#notes-status'>
-Checking the status file
+Checking the Status File
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#releases'>
-Creating an Apache release
+Creating an Apache Release
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#community'>
-Having an open and diverse community
+Creating an Open and Diverse community
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#notes-issues'>
@@ -173,11 +173,11 @@
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#process'>
-The graduation process
+The Graduation Process
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#toplevel'>
-Graduating to a top level project
+Graduating to a Top Level Project
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#tlp-community-vote'>
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#tlp-resolution'>
-Preparing A Charter
+Preparing a Charter
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#ipmc-top-level-recommendation'>
@@ -193,13 +193,13 @@
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#top-level-board-proposal'>
-Submission Of The Resolution To The Board
+Submission of the Resolution to the Board
  </a>
 </li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#subproject'>
-Graduating to a subproject
+Graduating to a Subproject
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#sp-community-vote'>
@@ -219,25 +219,25 @@
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#life-after-graduation'>
-Life after graduation
+Life After Graduation
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#notes-on-hand-over'>
-On The Handover
+Handover
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#existing-project-hand-over'>
-Graduating As Subproject
+Graduating as Subproject
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#new-project-hand-over'>
-Graduating As New Project
+Graduating as New Top Level Project
  </a>
 </li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#project-first-steps'>
-First Steps Outside The Incubator
+First Steps Outside the Incubator
  </a>
  <ul>
 <li><a href='#transfer'>
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#unincubate'>
-Removing the Podling from Incubation
+Final Revision of Podling Incubation Records
  </a>
 </li>
 <li><a href='#new-responsibilities'>
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@
 </div>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   <a name="introduction">What is graduation?</a>
+   <a name="introduction">What is Graduation?</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@
 
 			</p>
 <h3>
-   <a name="subproject-or-top-level">To Graduate To Subproject Or To Top Level</a>
+   <a name="subproject-or-top-level">Whether to Graduate to Subproject or to Top Level
Project</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@
 </div>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   <a name="requirements">Before you graduate</a>
+   <a name="requirements">Before You Graduate</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@
 				</ol>
 </div>
 <h3>
-   <a name="notes-status">Checking the status file</a>
+   <a name="notes-status">Checking the Status File</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@
 				</p>
 </div>
 <h3>
-   <a name="releases">Creating an Apache release</a>
+   <a name="releases">Creating an Apache Release</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <blockquote cite="http://catb.org/esr/writings/cathedral-bazaar/cathedral-bazaar/ar01s04.html">
@@ -535,7 +535,7 @@
 				</p>
 </div>
 <h3>
-   <a name="community">Having an open and diverse community</a>
+   <a name="community">Creating an Open and Diverse community</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -636,11 +636,11 @@
 </div>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   <a name="process">The graduation process</a>
+   <a name="process">The Graduation Process</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <h3>
-   <a name="toplevel">Graduating to a top level project</a>
+   <a name="toplevel">Graduating to a Top Level Project</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -717,7 +717,7 @@
 					</p>
 </div>
 <h4>
-   <a name="tlp-resolution">Preparing A Charter</a>
+   <a name="tlp-resolution">Preparing a Charter</a>
 </h4>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -795,7 +795,7 @@
 					</p>
 </div>
 <h4>
-   <a name="top-level-board-proposal">Submission Of The Resolution To The Board</a>
+   <a name="top-level-board-proposal">Submission of the Resolution to the Board</a>
 </h4>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -887,7 +887,7 @@
 </div>
 </div>
 <h3>
-   <a name="subproject">Graduating to a subproject</a>
+   <a name="subproject">Graduating to a Subproject</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -959,11 +959,11 @@
 </div>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   <a name="life-after-graduation">Life after graduation</a>
+   <a name="life-after-graduation">Life After Graduation</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <h3>
-   <a name="notes-on-hand-over">On The Handover</a>
+   <a name="notes-on-hand-over">Handover</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -975,7 +975,7 @@
 
 				</p>
 <h4>
-   <a name="existing-project-hand-over">Graduating As Subproject</a>
+   <a name="existing-project-hand-over">Graduating as Subproject</a>
 </h4>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@
 					</p>
 </div>
 <h4>
-   <a name="new-project-hand-over">Graduating As New Project</a>
+   <a name="new-project-hand-over">Graduating as New Top Level Project</a>
 </h4>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@
 </div>
 </div>
 <h3>
-   <a name="project-first-steps">First Steps Outside The Incubator</a>
+   <a name="project-first-steps">First Steps Outside the Incubator</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
@@ -1342,7 +1342,7 @@
 					</ol>
 </div>
 <h4>
-   <a name="unincubate">Removing the Podling from Incubation</a>
+   <a name="unincubate">Final Revision of Podling Incubation Records</a>
 </h4>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>



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