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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r449248 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/proposal.xml site-publish/guides/proposal.html
Date Sat, 23 Sep 2006 14:12:46 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sat Sep 23 07:12:46 2006
New Revision: 449248

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=449248
Log:
Improved background in line with Leo's feedback.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml?view=diff&rev=449248&r1=449247&r2=449248
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml Sat Sep 23 07:12:46 2006
@@ -48,9 +48,23 @@
 a good proposal increases the chances of a positive result.
            </p>
            <p>
-The proposal is (in some ways) a manifesto. Much of the information
-will be reused in the <a href='website.html'>Podling website</a>. A good proposal
-should shape the future evolution of the project.
+Proposals to the incubator generate attention. The 
+<a href='lists.html#general+at+incubator.apache.org'>general mailing list</a>
is open,
+widely discussed and well indexed. It is a very public space.
+The proposal is a manifesto. 
+A good proposal should target also the wider audience and not just the
+<a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29'>
+jury</a>.
+Use this time to engage and inform potential 
+<a href='participation.html#developer'>developers</a> 
+and <a href='participation.html#user'>users</a>. 
+           </p>
+			<p>
+Much of the information will be reused in the 
+<a href='website.html'>Podling website</a>. 
+A good proposal should shape the future evolution of the project 
+but each proposal captures only the particular instant at birth. 
+It is understood that projects change and evolve. 
            </p>
         </section>
         <section id='note-on-improvements'><title>Continuous Improvement</title>

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html?view=diff&rev=449248&r1=449247&r2=449248
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html Sat Sep 23 07:12:46 2006
@@ -243,9 +243,23 @@
 a good proposal increases the chances of a positive result.
            </p>
 <p>
-The proposal is (in some ways) a manifesto. Much of the information
-will be reused in the <a href="website.html">Podling website</a>. A good proposal
-should shape the future evolution of the project.
+Proposals to the incubator generate attention. The 
+<a href="lists.html#general+at+incubator.apache.org">general mailing list</a>
is open,
+widely discussed and well indexed. It is a very public space.
+The proposal is a manifesto. 
+A good proposal should target also the wider audience and not just the
+<a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29">
+jury</a>.
+Use this time to engage and inform potential 
+<a href="participation.html#developer">developers</a> 
+and <a href="participation.html#user">users</a>. 
+           </p>
+<p>
+Much of the information will be reused in the 
+<a href="website.html">Podling website</a>. 
+A good proposal should shape the future evolution of the project 
+but each proposal captures only the particular instant at birth. 
+It is understood that projects change and evolve. 
            </p>
 </div>
 <h3>



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