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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r447140 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/proposal.xml site-publish/guides/proposal.html
Date Sun, 17 Sep 2006 20:37:37 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Sep 17 13:37:37 2006
New Revision: 447140

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=447140
Log:
Fixed typos and improved wording

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml?view=diff&rev=447140&r1=447139&r2=447140
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml Sun Sep 17 13:37:37 2006
@@ -733,7 +733,7 @@
             	<p>
 Describe here any other special infrastructure requirements necessary for the proposal.
 Note that the infrastructure team usually requires a compelling argument
-before new services are allowed on core hardware. Most proposal do not require this section.
+before new services are allowed on core hardware. Most proposals should not require this
section.
             	</p>
                 <p>
 Most standard resources not covered above (such as continuous integration) 
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@
 Committers at Apache are <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html#hats'>individuals</a>
 and work here on their own behalf. They are judged on their merits not their
 affiliations. However, in the spirit of full disclosure, it is useful for
-any current affiliations which may effect their perceived independence to be 
+any current affiliations which may effect the perceived independence of the initial committers
to be 
 listed openly at the start.
                 </p><p>
 For example, those in salaried positions whose job is to work on the
@@ -793,10 +793,8 @@
 do.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-It's probably best to do this in a separate section away from the committers
-list. This list is only for initial committers drafted into the Podling.
-It does not need to be maintained and affiliations of new committers elected 
-after the bootstrap do not need to be listed.
+This is best done in a separate section away from the committers
+list.
                 </p>
                 <p>
 Only the affiliations of committers on the initial bootstrap list 
@@ -804,7 +802,7 @@
 <a href='http://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html#meritocracy'>meritocratic
process</a>. 
 It is strongly recommended that the once a project is
 bootstrapped, developers are judged by their contributions and not by their
-background. 
+background. This list should not be maintained after the bootstrap has been completed.
                 </p>
              </note>
         </section>
@@ -830,8 +828,8 @@
 [<a href='/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor'>definition</a>] for the
candidate.
                 </p>
                     <p>
-It is common for additional Mentors to <a href='partipation.html#mentor'>volunteer</a>
their services
-during the development of the proposal. The number of mentors for a Podling is limited only
by the
+It is common for additional Mentors to <a href='participation.html#mentors'>volunteer</a>
their services
+during the development of the proposal. The number of Mentors for a Podling is limited only
by the
 energy and interest of those eligible to Mentor. Three Mentors gives a quorum and allows

 a Podling more autonomy. The current consensus is that three or more Mentors makes the
 incubation process run more smoothly.

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html?view=diff&rev=447140&r1=447139&r2=447140
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html Sun Sep 17 13:37:37 2006
@@ -984,7 +984,7 @@
             	<p>
 Describe here any other special infrastructure requirements necessary for the proposal.
 Note that the infrastructure team usually requires a compelling argument
-before new services are allowed on core hardware. Most proposal do not require this section.
+before new services are allowed on core hardware. Most proposals should not require this
section.
             	</p>
                 <p>
 Most standard resources not covered above (such as continuous integration) 
@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@
 Committers at Apache are <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html#hats">individuals</a>
 and work here on their own behalf. They are judged on their merits not their
 affiliations. However, in the spirit of full disclosure, it is useful for
-any current affiliations which may effect their perceived independence to be 
+any current affiliations which may effect the perceived independence of the initial committers
to be 
 listed openly at the start.
                 </p><p>
 For example, those in salaried positions whose job is to work on the
@@ -1055,10 +1055,8 @@
 do.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-It's probably best to do this in a separate section away from the committers
-list. This list is only for initial committers drafted into the Podling.
-It does not need to be maintained and affiliations of new committers elected 
-after the bootstrap do not need to be listed.
+This is best done in a separate section away from the committers
+list.
                 </p>
                 <p>
 Only the affiliations of committers on the initial bootstrap list 
@@ -1066,7 +1064,7 @@
 <a href="http://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html#meritocracy">meritocratic
process</a>. 
 It is strongly recommended that the once a project is
 bootstrapped, developers are judged by their contributions and not by their
-background. 
+background. This list should not be maintained after the bootstrap has been completed.
                 </p>
              </note>
 </div>
@@ -1105,8 +1103,8 @@
 [<a href="/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor">definition</a>] for the
candidate.
                 </p>
                     <p>
-It is common for additional Mentors to <a href="partipation.html#mentor">volunteer</a>
their services
-during the development of the proposal. The number of mentors for a Podling is limited only
by the
+It is common for additional Mentors to <a href="participation.html#mentors">volunteer</a>
their services
+during the development of the proposal. The number of Mentors for a Podling is limited only
by the
 energy and interest of those eligible to Mentor. Three Mentors gives a quorum and allows

 a Podling more autonomy. The current consensus is that three or more Mentors makes the
 incubation process run more smoothly.



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