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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r437590 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/proposal.xml site-publish/guides/proposal.html
Date Mon, 28 Aug 2006 08:02:41 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Mon Aug 28 01:02:37 2006
New Revision: 437590

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=437590&view=rev
Log:
Tightened prose

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml?rev=437590&r1=437589&r2=437590&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/proposal.xml Mon Aug 28 01:02:37 2006
@@ -204,7 +204,6 @@
 </p>
 <pre>
 Example (XAP):
-
   XAP is to provide an XML-based declarative framework 
   for building, deploying and maintaining rich, interactive, 
   Ajax-powered web applications. A basic principal of XAP 
@@ -249,7 +248,6 @@
 </p>
 <pre>
 Example (Beehive):
-
   There is a strong need for a cohesive, easy-to-use programming model 
   for building J2EE applications. Developers new to Java are forced to 
   learn a myriad of APIs just to build simple applications; advanced J2EE
@@ -811,37 +809,27 @@
 <a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29'>
 Incubator PMC</a> 
 as part of the acceptance process, they can 
-have no formal role before the proposal is submitted hence the need for a Champion.
+have no formal role before the proposal is submitted.
 				</p>
 				<p>
 A Champion should be found before the proposal is formally submitted. 
                 </p>
-                <p>
-                [move this section into enter the incubator?]
-                </p>
                 </blockquote>
             </section>
             <section id='template-mentors'><title>Nominated Mentors</title>
                 <blockquote>
                     <p>
-[needs improvements?]
-A list of <a href='/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor'>eligible</a>  
-individuals nominated as <a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Mentor'>mentors</a>

-[<a href='/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor'>definition</a>] for the
candidate 
-would are willing to serve.
-                </p>
-                    <p>
-The absolute minimum is a single mentor but the current consensus is that (at least) 
-three mentors will make things go more smoothly. Three mentors gives a quorum and allows

-the project more autonomy.
-                </p>
-                    <p>
-The number of mentors a podling can have is limited only by the
-energy and interest of those eligible to mentor.
+Lists <a href='/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor'>eligible</a> (and willing)
+individuals nominated as <a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Mentor'>Mentors</a>

+[<a href='/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor'>definition</a>] for the
candidate.
                 </p>
                     <p>
-It is common for mentors to <a href='partication.html#mentor'>volunteer</a> their
services
-during the development process. 
+It is common for additional Mentors to <a href='partication.html#mentor'>volunteer</a>
their services
+during the development of the proposal. The number of mentors a podling can have is limited
only by the
+energy and interest of those eligible to Mentor.
+The absolute minimum is a single Mentor but the current consensus is that (at least) 
+three Mentors will make things go more smoothly. Three Mentors gives a quorum and allows

+a podling more autonomy. 
                 </p>
                 </blockquote>
             </section>
@@ -853,13 +841,13 @@
 The sponsoring entity can be:
 </p>
 <ul>
-        <li>Apache Board</li>
-        <li>Incubator PMC</li>
-        <li>Another Apache project</li>
+        <li>the Apache Board</li>
+        <li>the Incubator PMC</li>
+        <li>another Apache project</li>
 </ul>
                 <p>
 Unless there are strong links to an existing PMC, it is recommended that the
-proposal asked that the incubator PMC to act as sponsor.
+proposal asks that the incubator PMC to act as sponsor.
                 </p>
                 <p>
 Note that the final destination within the Apache organisational structure

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html?rev=437590&r1=437589&r2=437590&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/proposal.html Mon Aug 28 01:02:37 2006
@@ -301,7 +301,6 @@
 </p>
 <pre>
 Example (XAP):
-
   XAP is to provide an XML-based declarative framework 
   for building, deploying and maintaining rich, interactive, 
   Ajax-powered web applications. A basic principal of XAP 
@@ -352,7 +351,6 @@
 </p>
 <pre>
 Example (Beehive):
-
   There is a strong need for a cohesive, easy-to-use programming model 
   for building J2EE applications. Developers new to Java are forced to 
   learn a myriad of APIs just to build simple applications; advanced J2EE
@@ -995,14 +993,11 @@
 <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29">
 Incubator PMC</a> 
 as part of the acceptance process, they can 
-have no formal role before the proposal is submitted hence the need for a Champion.
+have no formal role before the proposal is submitted.
 				</p>
 				<p>
 A Champion should be found before the proposal is formally submitted. 
                 </p>
-                <p>
-                [move this section into enter the incubator?]
-                </p>
                 </blockquote>
 </div>
 <h5> 
@@ -1011,24 +1006,17 @@
 <div class="section-content">
 <blockquote>
                     <p>
-[needs improvements?]
-A list of <a href="/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor">eligible</a>  
-individuals nominated as <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Mentor">mentors</a>

-[<a href="/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor">definition</a>] for the
candidate 
-would are willing to serve.
-                </p>
-                    <p>
-The absolute minimum is a single mentor but the current consensus is that (at least) 
-three mentors will make things go more smoothly. Three mentors gives a quorum and allows

-the project more autonomy.
-                </p>
-                    <p>
-The number of mentors a podling can have is limited only by the
-energy and interest of those eligible to mentor.
+Lists <a href="/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor">eligible</a> (and willing)
+individuals nominated as <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Mentor">Mentors</a>

+[<a href="/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Mentor">definition</a>] for the
candidate.
                 </p>
                     <p>
-It is common for mentors to <a href="partication.html#mentor">volunteer</a> their
services
-during the development process. 
+It is common for additional Mentors to <a href="partication.html#mentor">volunteer</a>
their services
+during the development of the proposal. The number of mentors a podling can have is limited
only by the
+energy and interest of those eligible to Mentor.
+The absolute minimum is a single Mentor but the current consensus is that (at least) 
+three Mentors will make things go more smoothly. Three Mentors gives a quorum and allows

+a podling more autonomy. 
                 </p>
                 </blockquote>
 </div>
@@ -1043,13 +1031,13 @@
 The sponsoring entity can be:
 </p>
 <ul>
-        <li>Apache Board</li>
-        <li>Incubator PMC</li>
-        <li>Another Apache project</li>
+        <li>the Apache Board</li>
+        <li>the Incubator PMC</li>
+        <li>another Apache project</li>
 </ul>
                 <p>
 Unless there are strong links to an existing PMC, it is recommended that the
-proposal asked that the incubator PMC to act as sponsor.
+proposal asks that the incubator PMC to act as sponsor.
                 </p>
                 <p>
 Note that the final destination within the Apache organisational structure



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