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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r429126 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/participation.xml site-publish/guides/participation.html
Date Sun, 06 Aug 2006 12:38:05 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Aug  6 05:38:03 2006
New Revision: 429126

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=429126&view=rev
Log:
Correct some typos and improved some phrasing.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/participation.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/participation.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/participation.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/participation.xml?rev=429126&r1=429125&r2=429126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/participation.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/participation.xml Sun Aug  6 05:38:03 2006
@@ -97,16 +97,17 @@
         </section>
             <section id='committer'><title>As A Committer</title>
             	<p>
-A <a href='/incubation/Roles_And_Responsibilities.html#committer'>committer</a>

+A <a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#committer'>committer</a>

 is anyone with write access to the source repository. Election to committership in the Incubator
-works a little differently from the process that is usual elsewhere in Apache.
+works a little differently from the process that is usual elsewhere at Apache.
             	</p>
                 <p>
 Once a podling has been bootstrapped, <a href='#developer'>developers</a> are
nominated
 and election to committer happens in the usual way.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-When a proposal is just a candidate, there are two possible approaches.
+When a proposal is just a <a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Candidate'>candidate</a>,

+there are two possible approaches (for those interested in committership).
                 </p>
                 <p>
 The proposal typically 
@@ -116,10 +117,10 @@
 committer.
             	</p>
                 <p>
-Piling onto a proposal by adding your own name as an initial committer is impolite.
+Piling onto a proposal (by adding your own name as an initial committer) is impolite.
 Read 
 <a href='http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/200607.mbox/%3cC73C6D24-3216-4EB4-8846-1218B38CC594@gbiv.com%3e'>this
thread</a>.
-The right way to express interest is by a post to the list.
+The right way to express interest is by a post to the list with a brief introduction. 
             	</p>
              	<p>
 A podling needs to learn how to recruit new committers from its developers. So,
@@ -131,22 +132,22 @@
                 <p>
 Anyone with knowledge of open source or Apache can participate as a informal mentor
 for a podling. Development is open and anyone with an interest is encouraged to 
-subscribe to the podling lists. 
-            </p>
-                <p>
+subscribe. 
+            	</p>
+             	<p>
 Eligibility to act as a formal 
-<a href='/incubation/Roles_And_Responsibilities.html#Mentor'>Mentor</a> is 
+<a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Mentor'>Mentor</a> is 
 <a href='/incubation/Incubation_Policy#Mentor'>limited</a>. The best way for
an eligible 
-individuals to become a Mentors for a Podling is to post a note introducing themselves 
+individual to become a Mentor is to post a note introducing themselves 
 and volunteering their services to <code>general.AT.incubator.apache.org</code>

 during the development of the <a href='proposal.html'>proposal</a>.
-            </p>
+            	</p>
         </section>
         <section id='pmcer'><title>On The Incubator PMC</title>
              <p>
 Apache Members are encouraged to join the 
 <a href='/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29'>
-Incubator PMC</a>.
+Incubator PMC</a>. 
 			 </p>
 			 <p>
 Those who aren't members may be elected in the usual Apache way (though 

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/participation.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/participation.html?rev=429126&r1=429125&r2=429126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/participation.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/participation.html Sun Aug  6 05:38:03 2006
@@ -182,16 +182,17 @@
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>
-A <a href="/incubation/Roles_And_Responsibilities.html#committer">committer</a>

+A <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#committer">committer</a>

 is anyone with write access to the source repository. Election to committership in the Incubator
-works a little differently from the process that is usual elsewhere in Apache.
+works a little differently from the process that is usual elsewhere at Apache.
             	</p>
 <p>
 Once a podling has been bootstrapped, <a href="#developer">developers</a> are
nominated
 and election to committer happens in the usual way.
                 </p>
 <p>
-When a proposal is just a candidate, there are two possible approaches.
+When a proposal is just a <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Candidate">candidate</a>,

+there are two possible approaches (for those interested in committership).
                 </p>
 <p>
 The proposal typically 
@@ -201,10 +202,10 @@
 committer.
             	</p>
 <p>
-Piling onto a proposal by adding your own name as an initial committer is impolite.
+Piling onto a proposal (by adding your own name as an initial committer) is impolite.
 Read 
 <a href="http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/200607.mbox/%3cC73C6D24-3216-4EB4-8846-1218B38CC594@gbiv.com%3e">this
thread</a>.
-The right way to express interest is by a post to the list.
+The right way to express interest is by a post to the list with a brief introduction. 
             	</p>
 <p>
 A podling needs to learn how to recruit new committers from its developers. So,
@@ -219,16 +220,16 @@
 <p>
 Anyone with knowledge of open source or Apache can participate as a informal mentor
 for a podling. Development is open and anyone with an interest is encouraged to 
-subscribe to the podling lists. 
-            </p>
+subscribe. 
+            	</p>
 <p>
 Eligibility to act as a formal 
-<a href="/incubation/Roles_And_Responsibilities.html#Mentor">Mentor</a> is 
+<a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Mentor">Mentor</a> is 
 <a href="/incubation/Incubation_Policy#Mentor">limited</a>. The best way for
an eligible 
-individuals to become a Mentors for a Podling is to post a note introducing themselves 
+individual to become a Mentor is to post a note introducing themselves 
 and volunteering their services to <code>general.AT.incubator.apache.org</code>

 during the development of the <a href="proposal.html">proposal</a>.
-            </p>
+            	</p>
 </div>
 <h3>
    <a name="pmcer">On The Incubator PMC</a>
@@ -237,7 +238,7 @@
 <p>
 Apache Members are encouraged to join the 
 <a href="/incubation/Roles_and_Responsibilities.html#Incubator+Project+Management+Committee+%28PMC%29">
-Incubator PMC</a>.
+Incubator PMC</a>. 
 			 </p>
 <p>
 Those who aren't members may be elected in the usual Apache way (though 



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