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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r419102 - in /incubator/public/trunk: site-author/guides/branding.xml site-publish/guides/branding.html
Date Tue, 04 Jul 2006 21:07:05 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Tue Jul  4 14:07:05 2006
New Revision: 419102

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=419102&view=rev
Log:
Altered language after comments by Susan Wu.

Modified:
    incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/branding.xml
    incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/branding.html

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/branding.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/branding.xml?rev=419102&r1=419101&r2=419102&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/branding.xml (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-author/guides/branding.xml Tue Jul  4 14:07:05 2006
@@ -6,14 +6,14 @@
     <link href="http://purl.org/DC/elements/1.0/" rel="schema.DC"/>
   </properties>
   <body>
-  <section>
+  <section id='purpose'>
   <title>Purpose of this document</title>
   <p>Podlings are, by definition, not yet fully accepted as part of the
   Apache Software Foundation. Therefore, they are subject to additional
   branding constraints.</p>
   </section>
   
-  <section>
+  <section id='incubation-process'>
   <title>Publicity throughout the Incubation Process</title>
   
   <p>There are three stages in a podling's life-cycle that have an impact
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
      first reference in a document.</p>
   </section>
   
-  <section>
+  <section id='disclaimers'>
   <title>Disclaimers</title>
     
     <p>Podling web sites MUST include a clear disclaimer on their
@@ -90,23 +90,29 @@
     disclaimer approved by the Incubator PMC prior to use.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section><title>Incubator Logo</title>
+  <section id='logos'><title>Incubator Logo</title>
   <p>Podlings websites SHOULD contain the Apache Incubator Project
   logo as sign of affiliation.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section><title>Publicity activities</title>
+  <section id='activities'><title>Publicity activities</title>
   <p>Podlings MUST coordinate with the Apache Public Relations Committee on
   all publicity activities by a podling.</p>
+  <p>
+  The open source space can be difficult
+  to negotiate even for experienced professionals. The Apache Public Relations
+  Committee understands this space and it is in the best interests of all
+  that they are consulted.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
-  <title>Response to Inaccurate Statements</title>
+  <section id='unapproved'>
+  <title>Response to Unapproved Statements</title>
   <p>The Apache Public Relations Committee SHALL affirmatively and publicly
-  respond to any such inaccurate publicity surrounding podlings. </p>
+  respond to any unapproved statements surrounding podlings which are factually 
+  incorrect.</p>
   </section>
   
-  <section>
+  <section id='termination'>
   <title>Termination</title>
   <p>The Incubator PMC MAY consider the termination of a project for
   violation of these branding guidelines.</p>

Modified: incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/branding.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/branding.html?rev=419102&r1=419101&r2=419102&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/branding.html (original)
+++ incubator/public/trunk/site-publish/guides/branding.html Tue Jul  4 14:07:05 2006
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
     <!-- CONTENT -->
     <td align="left" valign="top" class="content">
                 <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Purpose of this document
+   <a name="purpose">Purpose of this document</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>Podlings are, by definition, not yet fully accepted as part of the
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
   branding constraints.</p>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Publicity throughout the Incubation Process
+   <a name="incubation-process">Publicity throughout the Incubation Process</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>There are three stages in a podling's life-cycle that have an impact
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
      first reference in a document.</p>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Disclaimers
+   <a name="disclaimers">Disclaimers</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>Podling web sites MUST include a clear disclaimer on their
@@ -155,28 +155,34 @@
     disclaimer approved by the Incubator PMC prior to use.</p>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Incubator Logo
+   <a name="logos">Incubator Logo</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>Podlings websites SHOULD contain the Apache Incubator Project
   logo as sign of affiliation.</p>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Publicity activities
+   <a name="activities">Publicity activities</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>Podlings MUST coordinate with the Apache Public Relations Committee on
   all publicity activities by a podling.</p>
+<p>
+  The open source space can be difficult
+  to negotiate even for experienced professionals. The Apache Public Relations
+  Committee understands this space and it is in the best interests of all
+  that they are consulted.</p>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Response to Inaccurate Statements
+   <a name="unapproved">Response to Unapproved Statements</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>The Apache Public Relations Committee SHALL affirmatively and publicly
-  respond to any such inaccurate publicity surrounding podlings. </p>
+  respond to any unapproved statements surrounding podlings which are factually 
+  incorrect.</p>
 </div>
            <h2><img src="/images/redarrow.gif" />
-   Termination
+   <a name="termination">Termination</a>
 </h2>
 <div class="section-content">
 <p>The Incubator PMC MAY consider the termination of a project for



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