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From "Jessica Tomechak" <jessica.tomec...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Review Request: Document procedure to choose default System Offering for System VMs
Date Fri, 11 Jan 2013 09:58:33 GMT

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docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/#comment32939>

    Creating a New System Service Offering should be <xref linkend="creating-system-service-offerings"/>



docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml
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    Suggest to phrase this as "Start MySQL." Either way, I think it should be MySQL, not MSSQL.



docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml
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    Could just say "Restart the Management Server." Otherwise, replace CloudStack with &PRODUCT;


- Jessica Tomechak


On Dec. 20, 2012, 6:08 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Dec. 20, 2012, 6:08 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, and Joe
Brockmeier.
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> Description
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> doc for Document procedure to choose default System Offering for System VMs
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> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/offerings.xml 10252fd 
>   docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml PRE-CREATION 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/diff/
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> Testing
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> Build cleanly. 
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> publican build --format=html --langs=en-US --config publican-installation.cfg
> publican build --format=html --langs=en-US --config publican-adminguide.cfg
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> Patch applies.
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> Thanks,
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> Radhika PC
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