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From "Jessica Tomechak" <jessica.tomec...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Review Request: Docbook for section Initializing and Testing
Date Fri, 31 Aug 2012 13:53:34 GMT

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Looks very good, thanks. Suggest removing the paragraph "For more information about using
VMs ... in the Administrator's Guide" since we can't guarantee this section will not appear
in the same book with the "Working with VMs" section, nor that there will always be a separate
book called "Administrator's Guide" that contains the "Working with VMs" section.

- Jessica Tomechak


On Aug. 31, 2012, 7:10 a.m., Gavin Lee wrote:
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> (Updated Aug. 31, 2012, 7:10 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack and Jessica Tomechak.
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> Description
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> Add docbook xml for section Initializing and Testing
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> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/initialize-and-test.xml e5a57d8 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6868/diff/
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> Testing
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> Passed publican build and verified output pdf
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> Thanks,
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> Gavin Lee
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