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From "Jessica Tomechak" <jessica.tomec...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Review Request: Fixed header (dtd and licence) ; added &PRODUCT; entity for branding; removed references to 3.0.4
Date Mon, 13 Aug 2012 23:22:20 GMT

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Are there still references to v3.0.3 in compatibility-matrix? That should be removed also.
There was no Apache CloudStack 3.0.3. Other than that, the changes relevant to the subject
line of this patch look OK to me. There are some copy editing things, but those can wait for
another change.


docs/en-US/create-vpn-customer-gateway.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21685>

    Appears the sentence was cut off after "Supported"



docs/en-US/create-vr-network-offering.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21688>

    Typo "virutal"



docs/en-US/create-vr-network-offering.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21689>

    Typo "Firtst"



docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat-vpc.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21692>

    Typo "Statid"



docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21693>

    Typo "administraor"



docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21694>

    Typo "administraor"; missing word "to" before "create"



docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21695>

    Typo "administraor"



docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21696>

    Two empty list bullets here. Is content missing?



docs/en-US/release-ip-for-vpc.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21697>

    Typo, should be "Allotted"



docs/en-US/release-ip-for-vpc.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/#comment21698>

    Seems like a dangerously incorrect .png will be displayed here. The alt text below also
needs checking.


- Jessica Tomechak


On Aug. 7, 2012, 8 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Aug. 7, 2012, 8 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack and Prasanna Santhanam.
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> Description
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> Fixed the issues mentioned by Prasanna at https://reviews.apache.org/r/6328/ for the
Review Request #6328.
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> 
> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/Book_Info.xml 6ff42f2 
>   docs/en-US/acquire-new-ip-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-gateway-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-loadbalancer-rule-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-portforward-rule-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-tier.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-vm-to-tier.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/admin-guide.xml c10455d 
>   docs/en-US/change-ssvm-service-offering.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/compatibility-matrix.xml ac8e838 
>   docs/en-US/configure-acl.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/configure-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/create-vpn-customer-gateway.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/create-vpn-gateway-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/create-vr-network-offering.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat.xml 0895b88 
>   docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/release-ip-address.xml 59c4814 
>   docs/en-US/release-ip-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/release-notes-3.0.4.xml 21f47c6 
>   docs/en-US/site-to-site-vpn.xml 2e29909 
>   docs/en-US/upgrade-management-server.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/using-sshkeys.xml a753b32 
>   docs/en-US/vpc.xml cd298a1 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6427/diff/
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> 
> Testing
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> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
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