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From "Prasanna Santhanam" <Prasanna.Santha...@citrix.com>
Subject Re: Review Request: This patch includes the preliminary documentation draft for the defect fixes and new features: site-to-site vpn and inter-vlan routing.
Date Fri, 03 Aug 2012 09:33:51 GMT

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I looked at a few more that might need fixing.

1> All the .xml should have ASF license header.
2> DOCTYPE header references the DTD at file:///C:/Program%20Files%20(x86)/Publican/DocBook_DTD/docbookx.dtd
instead of "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd"
3> &PRODUCT; entity to be used where branding is done (Apache CloudStack). Should not
have references to CloudPlatform.
4> The document still references CloudPlatform in most places. You should use the &entity
there as well?
5> I see a reference to CloudStack 3.0.4. CloudStack has not had a 3.0.4 release. Should
these be 4.0 perhaps?

Let me know if you need any help fixing these. I can fix 1> and 2>.

- Prasanna Santhanam


On Aug. 3, 2012, 6:01 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Aug. 3, 2012, 6:01 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack.
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> Description
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> This patch includes the preliminary documentation draft for the defect fixes and new
features: site-to-site vpn and inter-vlan routing.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/Book_Info.xml 6ff42f2 
>   docs/en-US/acquire-new-ip-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-tier.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/add-vm-to-tier.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/admin-guide.xml c10455d 
>   docs/en-US/change-ssvm-service-offering.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/compatibility-matrix.xml ac8e838 
>   docs/en-US/configure-acl.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/configure-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/create-vpn-customer-gateway.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/create-vpn-gateway-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/create-vr-network-offering.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/enable-disable-static-nat.xml 0895b88 
>   docs/en-US/inter-vlan-routing.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/release-ip-for-vpc.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/release-notes-3.0.4.xml 21f47c6 
>   docs/en-US/site-to-site-vpn.xml 2e29909 
>   docs/en-US/upgrade-management-server.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/using-sshkeys.xml a753b32 
>   docs/en-US/vpc.xml cd298a1 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6328/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Radhika PC
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