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From Mike Rumph <mike.ru...@oracle.com>
Subject Re: small patch for httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
Date Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:03:15 GMT
Hello Daniel,

What you've written is definitely better than what was there before.
But there are some slight punctuation errors.
So just to give you a different option from a person that only speaks 
English well,
I've listed below how I would write your version of the sentence.
It's just slightly different.

Thanks,

Mike

On 11/29/2016 1:10 PM, Luis Gil de Bernabé wrote:
> Nice,
> sounds better, but here an English spoken commiter might better check 
> this out :)
> Regards.
>
>
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> On 29 November 2016 at 17:37, Daniel <daniel@ezra-s.net 
> <mailto:daniel@ezra-s.net>> wrote:
>
>     Hello,
>
>     I'd like to submit a little patch for a sentence in:
>     httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
>
>     The original sentence I'm changing is:
>     "There are still request and responses and headers and all that"
>
>     and the proposed change is:
>     "There are still request,responses, headers and all those typical
>     elements from HTTP"
>
"There are still requests, responses, headers, and all the other typical 
elements from HTTP."
>
>
>     The reasoning behind this starts while trying to translate the
>     sentence to Spanish, where it becomes too aparent as chatty, or
>     tasteless, and from my standpoint it may also sound too coloquial
>     in english too (although I'm no native speaker so that's up to you
>     guys to judge).
>
>     I'm attaching the diff file which includes the whole paragrah
>     because it has also been adapted for word wrapping.
>
>     If I'm being too picky or proposing this incorrectly, please do
>     not hesitate to let me know.
>
>
>     -- 
>     *Daniel Ferradal*
>     IT Specialist
>
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