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From Daniel <dan...@ezra-s.net>
Subject small patch for httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
Date Tue, 29 Nov 2016 16:37:50 GMT
Hello,

I'd like to submit a little patch for a sentence in:
httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml

The original sentence I'm changing is:
"There are still request and responses and headers and all that"

and the proposed change is:
"There are still request,responses, headers and all those typical elements
from HTTP"

The reasoning behind this starts while trying to translate the sentence to
Spanish, where it becomes too aparent as chatty, or tasteless, and from my
standpoint it may also sound too coloquial in english too (although I'm no
native speaker so that's up to you guys to judge).

I'm attaching the diff file which includes the whole paragrah because it
has also been adapted for word wrapping.

If I'm being too picky or proposing this incorrectly, please do not
hesitate to let me know.


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*Daniel Ferradal*
IT Specialist

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