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From Luis Gil de Bernabé <ljgbpfeif...@googlemail.com>
Subject Re: small patch for httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
Date Tue, 29 Nov 2016 21:10:40 GMT
Nice,
sounds better, but here an English spoken commiter might better check this
out :)
Regards.


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On 29 November 2016 at 17:37, Daniel <daniel@ezra-s.net> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I'd like to submit a little patch for a sentence in:
> httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
>
> The original sentence I'm changing is:
> "There are still request and responses and headers and all that"
>
> and the proposed change is:
> "There are still request,responses, headers and all those typical elements
> from HTTP"
>
> The reasoning behind this starts while trying to translate the sentence to
> Spanish, where it becomes too aparent as chatty, or tasteless, and from my
> standpoint it may also sound too coloquial in english too (although I'm no
> native speaker so that's up to you guys to judge).
>
> I'm attaching the diff file which includes the whole paragrah because it
> has also been adapted for word wrapping.
>
> If I'm being too picky or proposing this incorrectly, please do not
> hesitate to let me know.
>
>
> --
> *Daniel Ferradal*
> IT Specialist
>
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>
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